Screenshot / Leafy Lake Railroad

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  posted 6 years ago

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  Iron Rattler Offline

  I think the roofs could use some breaking up. Right now they are very green in combo with the foliage and all it's a bit much.

  posted 6 years ago

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  Jappy Offline

  Foliage is dense but I like that. But I do think you've used too much of that big Liam tree in this screen. Some less heavily textured trees would work better. Also, listen to Iron about the roof. It's a bit monotonous at the moment. Maybe even consider a different colour? The green blends a little too much with the dense foliage around it.

  posted 6 years ago

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