Screenshot / NCSO Zen Garden/Mountain Civilization

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  posted 6 years ago

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  Impulse Offline

  You should try to get rid of the darker foliage (especially on the walls) to make it feel more lively and more Japanese, in a way. You've made a good start though.

   

  Also, welcome to NE! Great first screens you've posted, way to go!

  posted 6 years ago

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  MK98 Offline

  You've got real talent! It looks really cool, but it doesn't feel japanese to me. I think that especially the roofs are too generic.  Using a wooden coaster track as a roof looks more asian. Otherwise a very good looking sceen!

  posted 6 years ago

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  i liked, good work

  posted 6 years ago

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  BirbSMB Offline

  I highly agree with MK98, and I think an addition track should be used on top of the wooden coaster suggestion. I've seen your recent work on some ORCT2 MP servers and it really shows you have potential. For some reason I really wish the terraforming had more textures in it, although it isn't bad.
  
  I gave this a 55%.

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  inthemanual Offline

  no track roofs please. this looks great.

  posted 6 years ago

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  Jene Offline

  The double posts really seem to work well! The roof does seem a little plain and not really Japanesey (if that is a word). Mixed feelings about track roof though . . . I'm looking forward to see how this evolves.  

  posted 6 years ago

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