Screenshot / Redesign | Kart Farm

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  Alfy Offline

  I really like this. Looks natural. Love the go karts. But I think you should try to make everything look a bit less grid like.

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  Mattk48 Offline

  ^especially with the mountains. If you could break up that straight line jagged edge, it would help alot.

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  Timothy Cross Offline

  The obvious grid and symmetry, along with the simplicity of everything, perhaps shows a certain childlike naivety that really expresses well the ‘play wood’ name and emits a lot of innocence and fun. I really appreciate it. Just stick to the same direction for the whole composition if that’s what you go with. Seems to me your brave, honest, and thouroughly enjoying the game by playing it rather than a day at the office. Great work.

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  Daoniyella Offline

  I really like this. The GoKarts are very cool. I would consider to either change the red track color or the train color of the mine train. I think they cancel each other but otherwise i like the layout of the coaster

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  MK98 Offline

  You're really creative. I'd suggest making the borders of the track a bit more obvious at some places. Sometimes it's hard to see what direction the track goes.

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  tce_k Offline

  Awesome work.

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  Thank you all, I liked the suggestions I will try to improve this Kart

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  The obvious grid and symmetry, along with the simplicity of everything, perhaps shows a certain childlike naivety that really expresses well the ‘play wood’ name and emits a lot of innocence and fun. I really appreciate it. Just stick to the same direction for the whole composition if that’s what you go with. Seems to me your brave, honest, and thouroughly enjoying the game by playing it rather than a day at the office. Great work.

  
  yeah yeah, you spoke well thank you

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  I made some modifications according to your suggestions, I think it got better

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  posted 5 years ago

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