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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • In:Cities%s's Photo

    Yes.

     

    Man this is so good. Excellent small details and atmosphere. Colors are great, and those ruins on the left are fantastic. Keep adding cool stuff like that.

     

    No complaints at all!

  • Faas%s's Photo
    Looks great, but I would change the colours of the grey details in the station tower. Stands out in a bad way on an otherwise great building.
  • ar2910%s's Photo

    This is wonderful! The colours are fantastic, the station is very atmospheric and well composed, and those ruins are superb! From experience I know that ruins are always hard to get right, and you really hit the nail on the head :)

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    I want to say that this is your best layout yet on a coaster. Keep up the good work.

  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    Love the ruins to the left. Great detail

  • Steve%s's Photo
    Great stuff. Probably your best work, yeah.

    Couple of suggestions I have might be a pain, but the area where the cobra is with the path and the station and brake run right over it just leaves no room to breathe. Ideally you would have a bit more straight section underground before the cobra, allowing a tile of space under the brake run for some nice garden/foliage rather just being directly over the path. I would even suggest an extra tile over on the other side under the cobra too.

    Second, I would lose the path through the dive loop and make it either just a single, fun little walking path or just a seating area that doesn’t connect on the left or right. Just creates an unnecessary loop in the path layout in space you could otherwise do something more interesting with.

    Keep going!
  • spacek531%s's Photo

    found how to put the A1 in hmmm?

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    I love the ruins.

  • RWE%s's Photo

    This is the best screen i've seen from you yet. Nice work.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    Lovely ruins on the left. The tan really sells it better than I expected.
  • Version1%s's Photo

    Great station. Manages to be complex, yet simple. Ruins are amazing, as is the atmosphere.

     

    Also railroad.

  • FredD%s's Photo

    Wow, such a great atmosphere this corner of the park has! Glad you changed the color of the inverted (told you so!) ;)

     

    But that station is phenomenal, really your best archy yet!

  • coasterfreak101%s's Photo

    The only thing I don't love, and this is nitpicking, is the use of the wood texture for the raised land/tunnels. Even if you use a wooden wall object to cover it up, that gives you the ability to choose a color that matches better. Everything else though is ace!

  • alex%s's Photo

    Great screen Jappy. Maybe add a bit of overgrowth to the ruins to make them look older and blend into the ground a bit. I agree with Steve's comments too.

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    What a bunch of comments! Thanks a lot!

     

    @Faas: You're right. I've changed them to brown, it looks better already. Thanks for the suggestion.

     

    @Scoop: Haha, yeah..... My layout...

     

    @Steve: Having those bunch of supports on the path under the cobra roll bothers me indeed. I'm hesitant about editing the coaster though but I'll see what I can do. Your second suggestion, I'm not sure about. Having a seating area there could be nice but there's not a lot of room and having a dead end means there will hardly be any guests crossing the loop like I want.

     

    @spacek531: Why do you think the track is there? ;) It's painted blue, now it looks like Hurricane from the RH&DR.

     

    @coasterfreak101: Perhaps, but I like this look and since the park is huge I have to keep the object limit in mind. Maybe in when the rest is more done.

     

    @alex: I dunno. Guests can visit those ruins, and from my memory quite a lot of those British abbey ruins have actualy nicely mown lawns surrouding them.

     

    To all the rest, thank you for your nice remarks!

  • alex%s's Photo

    i know what you mean, but it just needs something subtle so that you don't have the clean edge of the objects against the grass floor.

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    Love it. Great colours, and excellent foliage choices.

  • BelgianGuy%s's Photo

    2 things I'd change!

    make the railroad mine train track with rock land colour under it and make the brown brick wall pieces the brown shade you used in the fences so it matches a bit more... otherwise really nicely done!

     

    also having seen the park ingame already please be careful about the object limit so you won't have the problem I had with terra fantasia, the scale of the park you have you can't build this micro heavy in every part of the park so be careful cuz it's all very small single pieces and it adds up scaryly quick

  • Mynock%s's Photo

    Super pretty and colorful. This looks incredible

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