Screenshot / Ronin

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    excellent. love the scene and the little pagoda is charming

  • Poke%s's Photo

    What a lovely scene. My only nit-pick would be the coaster visually blocking the pagoda staircase. 

  • Bluetiful_Monday%s's Photo

    Classy and simple, but some higher level things taking place. In particular, I like how the pagoda style gazebo was done. The South American pillars feel so at home there.

  • Gustav Goblin%s's Photo

    You're off to an incredible start as a contest player. For the record, I thought you were a NE regular on a smurf account at first. Landscaping, layouts, and archi are all beyond reproach.

  • J K%s's Photo

    Love that. The subtle green flowerbeds as more grown sections of grass is chefs kiss. Can't wait to see more.

     

    Also first screen! Yessss!

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Very good!

  • RCTNW%s's Photo
    Interesting screen. Love the pagoda. Nice work
  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Really cool! I like the foliage here and the pagoda is well done. Brilliant first screen.

  • posix%s's Photo
    Quite sweet naturalistic theme. Reminiscent of European style.
     
    Had you experimented with the track colour? The orange is good because it's inoffensive and not distracting from the overall scene. At the same time it's a little sleepy perhaps.
  • hypnopompia%s's Photo


    Quite sweet naturalistic theme. Reminiscent of European style.
     
    Had you experimented with the track colour? The orange is good because it's inoffensive and not distracting from the overall scene. At the same time it's a little sleepy perhaps.

     

    I think I know what you mean. Originally the track was gold (I was undecided on support color). This did help it stand out more, but I'm not sure which was better.

    I had a hard time organically integrating orange into the other rides and architecture. Changing the giga track to orange helped provide some needed color variety while giving the coaster its own identity (as one of the only instances of orange in its park). Perhaps the ideal would be an orange that is slightly less soft?

  • posix%s's Photo

    If you have one in this palette, give it a go.

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