(Archive) Advertising District / The Park With No Name

Two things jump out at me.

1) The entrance to the ride queue is kinda hidden away, it needs to be given more emphasis.

2) Lil' Bugger is a terrible name for a family coaster. Call it the Bumblebee or something.

i agree with what Turtle said...

there is one thing that i do not like. single wide path is a big no-no for me. like the path aside of the lowest building. also the path at the dinnerstand is way to small.. a 1\2 path is imo to less for a good feeling in this park.

good luck in the future on this one!

\\PBJ\\

Oh, and youre missing a deco piece on the station.

-Ryan

the path is too straight...throw in some curves and turns. The coaster looks fine, but the queue line should be dressed up

Oh, and youre missing a deco piece on the station.

-Ryan

No he's not. It's glitching so the piece is more or less behind the wooden planks

Ok, I'm going to completely redo the foliage, and I've enlarged most of the single wide paths, and changed the name to Butterfly.



I fixed up the one building and made the queue entrance more noticeable but got a white glitch thing, anyway to fix that?



And following the path will eventually lead you to the futuristic themed area of the park, and a building.



yay

Edited by nimrod, 23 January 2007 - 08:49 PM.

build a path over it, then delete it. repeat if necessary.

anyway, looks a lot better, good job.

^
usually build a sloped path ont op of that white one and then delete , all better.

All of your buildings strike me as being the same, which is good for one area, but try and mix up your achi a bit.

add athird color on that white/blue building. it's decent, but the paths are a little weird, how they go under the buildings like that.

In the second building, I think that awning should be supported more. Otherwise, it looks nice and small-scale.

I really like how its abstract. Nice and original.

it looks much better. Good job.

Just a slide.

fix your floating wall thing somehow.. not sure what to tell you...
and maybe try different enterance/exit booths..
otherwise, very pretty.

i would add a fence there on the slide so kids don't fall off the side.

^ I wouldn't. That would be funny to watch.

how'd you get the fences to go away?

great foliage

I just put the white brick walls around the slide.

Thanks for the comments.

how'd you get the fences to go away?

great foliage

the brick wall is higher, otherwise the fence for the ride is still there.
-JDP