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  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    I downloaded the original to check it out, I enjoyed it. Have you made the map larger, or kept it the same size?
  • trav%s's Photo
    I think it's gone up to like 100x100 size now so a fair bit larger.
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    I think it's gone up to like 100x100 size now so a fair bit larger.


    Neat, I'm quite excited to see this finished, I loved the atmosphere of the unfinished version, so I think I will enjoy this even more. :D
  • trav%s's Photo
    Good news! The Amusement Park section of this map is now done woooo. Now to build the town.


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    Celebratory screen! Everything but the building on this screen is more than 4 years old I'd say (Dunno why the colours are weird)
  • nin%s's Photo
    Other than the jungle fences, I really like that wooden building.
  • trav%s's Photo
    Jungle fences are meant to look vikingy and are around this area a fair bit cos they're the most vikingy looking fences I've got. And I like to put fences on buildings for no particular reason.


    I'd like someone to take a look at it so far in game, just to make sure that the amusement park area is working fully and everything, and to give me any constructive criticism to make it a bit better, taking into consideration it's not meant to be amazing, it's bloody old. Any takers?
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    Jungle fences are meant to look vikingy and are around this area a fair bit cos they're the most vikingy looking fences I've got. And I like to put fences on buildings for no particular reason.


    I'd like someone to take a look at it so far in game, just to make sure that the amusement park area is working fully and everything, and to give me any constructive criticism to make it a bit better, taking into consideration it's not meant to be amazing, it's bloody old. Any takers?


    I would gladly volunteer, would love to see how this has progressed!
  • Xtreme97%s's Photo
    Looks good for four years old. Can't wait to see this finished :)

    The colours are off because you probably converted the image to jpeg using paint which messes up the colours. If you have Windows 7, there should be a Snipping Tool in Accessories. Use that instead.
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    It's okay. I like the building, and I have no problem with the fences. They look good here.

    Looking forward to the release!
  • Jazz%s's Photo
    it's not really coming together for me. i feel like the colors of the canvas entrance and the coaster are really clashing with everything else. the 2x2 is alright, the path may be a bit narrow? the jungle fences are ironically the only touch that i'm liking in this screen.
  • Ling%s's Photo
    I think the white in the detail layers on the building is too stark. I know how much we all hate brown on brown, but I'm just not sure white is a good contrast there.
  • trav%s's Photo

    it's not really coming together for me. i feel like the colors of the canvas entrance and the coaster are really clashing with everything else. the 2x2 is alright, the path may be a bit narrow? the jungle fences are ironically the only touch that i'm liking in this screen.



    It's meant to clash. I don't know if they have parks such as Blackpool Pleasure Beach in America, but everything is supposed to clash to give it a sort of 'busy' feel. The narrow path also helps with this I think. I'll try a different colour with the canvas, but the coaster colours are staying this way, because I think it fits more with the overall park.

    Thanks everyone else! As I've said, the only thing left to do is the town on the opposite bank, which shouldn't take long at all because it'll just be architecture with a few cool ideas here and there. I'd expect a release in May at this rate.
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    If you're going for a blackpool feel it should be a lot denser with MUCH less foliage.
  • trav%s's Photo
    ^Don't worry, this screen is (Purposely, so it doesn't give too much away about the park) misleading as to how dense it is. Although there is still a lot of foliage because I'm going for a 'middle class' Blackpool feel, due to Clovelly actually being a nice seaside town in the West of England, rather than shitty Blackpool haha. I'll have a look about making it more dense around this area though. But to give an idea of how dense it is, in the uncropped version of this shot, there are 8 rides, including 3 coasters, 1 water ride, 1 big dark ride, and 3 flats.
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    First person to guess where Marty is gets to see a screenshot of what's past the 'entrance'. (The roof isn't there for a reason in this screenshot, I will be putting a roof on it for the final version that you can all have fun taking apart)
  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo
    that awning is pretty awesome.
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    Yeah, fuck marty, that awning is amazing!
  • trav%s's Photo
    This makes me sad because it's not meant to be an 'Awning' as such haha. Well, it is, but a themed awning that should give a good idea of what sort of SEAside attraction this is...
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    I know its a themed awning, thats whats so awesome about it.
  • Ling%s's Photo
    Shut up and take the compliments damnit trav

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