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		Looks like a nice start. The roof seems to look slightly out of place though, maybe it's just a colour thing. - 
						
			
		
		
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		very nice. I want to say you have too many fiddly bits on there, but i think it'd look great from a visitor perspective. - 
						
			
		
		
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		That's brilliant Fr3ak, but I wanna see it done.Edited by Gwazi, 26 September 2007 - 05:09 PM.
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 Liampie
			
			
				
				
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A lot of things on this screen still have to be done, but it's good enough to show you this teaser.Edited by Liampie, 25 November 2009 - 04:10 PM.
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wow. very creative. I love that window construction. you should maybe change the "path", though. it looks out of place. - 
						
			
		
		
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		Interesting however you need to watch your scale. It appears WAY to big for RCT in that the based of the first set of windows are nearly 3-4 base blocks up from the ground. Take a look at the tree and then compare it to structure and You will see what I mean.
I always try to have a handyman or someone around when I build so I can build to scale.
Also, what’s with the bones?
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		I don't like the bones on the roof, but other then that AMAZING building.
I especially love the arches, pillars, and coloring above them. - 
						
			
		
		
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		Petrol > Amosphère is likeable, i wait the next to do my critique.
Fr3ak>I find your arc use is too superficial to give a really setting up to yours buildings. Some objects follow on from each other with difficulty so i don't like. There are ideas but i find the whole of the structure is bad.
Edit: Liampie > It is a basic structure, classic but effective thank to its simplicity and a quite usual adjustementEdited by Sûre, 28 September 2007 - 04:56 AM.
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		Why are there vines that look like they're floating? I mean, if there was a trellice or something it might make more sense. - 
						
			
		
		
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		Wow, freak, that's amazing.
Is that from the same park as the entrance screen you showed? - 
						
			
		
		
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		the crazy path sort of confuses me- it'd be better if the buildings all had separate floor patterns to help distinguish. Other than that, definitely some great stuff. - 
						
			
		
		
 Fr3ak
			
			
				
				
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		Thanks you 2, too .. but Intamin .. I don't really know what you mean? Another path for every building?
I will open a thread with this soon .. 
		
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