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That colored water dye would diffuse into the lake and you'd have an off-color lake and a lighter pocket from the extra cash spent on dye. Also, from the impact of the fountain, it would disturb the water enough to overflow it onto your path. I've never been a fan of path right on the water, I'd rather see that on the same height as the rest of it.
The building seems a bit odd with the 2 different types of the same kind of material (brick), but it does look kind of nice after a while. I do like the broken up path with the little winding one to the back right. Lastly, I would just cut that 1x2 section of the building. Unless you're using it as a facade (which I also wouldn't recommend) there's nothing that could really happen in a place that small. Either move it up one and away from the coaster and make it 2x2 or scrap it, I'd say.
Still a really nice screen so far... I like what you're doing with the park.

someones a bit pedantic

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Comments and criticism appreciated.

Yeah, there's nothing wrong with the comment at all, it's actually helpful.
And to reply to some stuff you said...

The colored jets are supposed to actually be normal fountains with colored lights shined on them, and the actual dock is supposed to be a viewing area for the "Nighttime Spectacular", I guess that's hard to get across in RCT2 and should have mentioned it.
Good point with the overflowing water, I'll most likely make a wall there to block it off.
I wanna keep the dock at the same height as it was, only because I like the fact that you step down to the viewing area.
Hmmm, the 1x2 section....i was thinking maybe urinals or sinks could fit in that spot, no?

Thanks for the comment, it is much appreciated.

I would just cut that 1x2 section of the building. Unless you're using it as a facade (which I also wouldn't recommend) there's nothing that could really happen in a place that small.

Pantry/Storage closet.


and trust me, plenty happens in storage closets.

i do agree about the fountains, though. they don't fit there, especially not colored.

You must work details if you want to improve your style. Structures are too basic.

Edited by Sûre, 16 September 2007 - 04:16 AM.

From what I see, everything is very nice, except there is a major problem. There are a lot of holes in your themeing. You need to fill it to capacity with various, differently shaped buildings, with a lot more rides. In doing that don't over do it though.

The bullrushes in the first screen look okay, but I think there are too many. Replace a few with some shrubs or something of that nature (pun?). At least, that's what I would do. It all looks really good though. Can't wait to see more!