(Archive) Advertising District / Pleasure Island
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 08-February 09
				 
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 TheLegendaryMatthew
			
			
				
				
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		The car ride needs a bit more supports and a bit more in the length.
The coaster looks a bit unoriginal and it also looks a bit out of placed. I would remove the lake, change the colors to something that fits the theme of the park and maybe add some more interesting elements. I would also like to add that your using the incline levels bad. Theres a lot of small sloped slopes were there could easily be steeper ones, Theres a bit of unneeded vertical sections at the end. Original, but not the best using it a then end. If you want to use it propley try to make it the first drop or after an MCBR.
I will come up with more later.
Also the colors on the car ride supports suck. Try brown and tan?
-Matthew.K 
		
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