Blaze Battle / BBT - Fisch vs JDP

Please post your battles here. After both are posted a poll will be added and they will be voted on over the weekend. Most votes after then wins. If there is a tie the vote will stay open until another vote is cast.

Also remember:

- No posting until BOTH battles are posted. Feedback can wait till after both are up and if it is posted before then it will be deleted.
- Battles must be between 15-20 lines long. No more, no less.
- Voting will start once both battles are posted.
- Winner moves on to the semi-finals where they will face the winner of the inVersed vs jaguarkid140 match-up.

Deadline to post battles is Friday July 16th at 11:59 PM EST.

Failure to post prior to the deadline will result in disqualification from the tournament.

Good luck.

fisch is about to go down, bitch in the first round/
im a fuckin soldier and NEs my battle ground/
im gettin ya this time so please dont frown/
imagineIt was last year, we aint friends you clown/
im about to take this ova, mix it with bakinsoda/
and crack you like a rock, mountain breaker, bolder/
so when im done with you there wont be nothin leftover/
except this irish warrior, only one third clover/
i can mix it up quickly, you aint as shifty/
im fresh to go and feelin oh so spiffy/
my lyrics come together and theyre nifty/
your rhymes are old pussy n aint as slipparyy/
so people praise me, you need to embrace me/
im ready for whatever with these boots im lacing/
and i know you you lookin at these lyrics spacing/
but please welcome JDP the Blaze Battle champin/

-JDP

dear Jay dizzle,


man, i'm writing you this letter my friend
seems like it came down to the same game again
and just like last time, let it have the same procedure
victory's all mine, all for the black German leader
defeater, of the coaster nazi, an American Aryan
slaughtered by a kraut eating Barbarian
that's funny, cuz i can see the irony
while i am being hailed you'll weep silently
but i really don't mean to be mean to you
i just want people to see the truth
see the true JDP behind his forum mask
the whiny, vulnerable bs talking B ass
this blaze kills you like Zyklon B gas
that's what Fisch does to "fresh rap" noobs
lyricswise Fisch inflicts fresh flesh wounds
cuz when I battle my opponents get grilled like beef
might be raw but people shout well done to me
cuz that's what they want their rapper steaks to be
so as you see, for you it's all over already
for me, your dear friend, the victory podium is ready


with kind regards, no hard feelings

Fisch

I voted for Fisch. It actually felt like he was attacking JDP instead of how JDP just seemed to talk himself up. I felt both verses lacked disses. JDP's flow kind of sounded like he was inspired from Eminem's Recovery.

Easily fisch. He has serious skill.

Fisch FTW

JDP all you had were rhymes, and thats it, need more substance and focus bro.

Thanks for the support guys!
I'm a little surprised by how well this is going for me as I actually expected JDP to win this time but I guess I'm a lucky little German.
JDP, I'm not just saying this to sound nice, but I really thought your rap had a great flow! Keep your head up old friend!

You won't be so lucky next round!

^Nah no em from me.

I forgot people just read for insults here rather then flow (which is hard to translate through typin anyway).
-JDP

its battling, not just rhyming. You do have good flow JDP, no denying that, but theres no setup lines or strong punchs to follow you know.

^Yeah man I feel ya. I didn't know the rules were single elimination or else i wouldnt have typed mine in 5 minutes...
-JDP