Fiesta! / Rocky Mountian park
- 26-November 10
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wheres_walto Offline
There's definitely something epic about that first screen, I'm not a big fan of the green on the woodie, and the foliage badly needs improvement. Keep it up though, welcome to NE! -
SSSammy Offline
orite, no need to be a bitch to new players.
it needs improvement, but i like it
good job. -
Dotrobot Offline
I don't like it, bad layout and the foliage sucks, sorry.
Instead of this, let's actually give some tips!
Layout, don't try to go for something big and fun if it doesn't look good. If you build realistically like building coasters as if they were made by a real company base off other coasters that company has made and put your own twists to it. After a while you might be able to think of a coaster completely from scratch. If you don't go hard core realistic focus on what looks most aesthetically pleasing while keeping good pacing.
Foliage.. From what i see it's just 2 variations of trees. Add 2 to more type of trees. Make trees more dense but not in every tile. Also. Decide what kind of look you want to go for. You want your park to be located in a dense forest so the map would be covered with trees? Or if you wanna go for patches of trees with trees centered and surroundings by shrubs. Remember when doing patches not every patch of tree is circular. patches can be connected to patches to give a more natrual flow.
Refrain from using that color with wooden walls as if gives off a muddy look in some views. Try the other dark brown that is offered in game.
Green on coasters is way too ugly, you can always get color schemes from other woodies that might not or be similar to yours.
For really tall airtime hills like that it helps if you make the airtime hills wider instead of being pointy at the end. So steep track -> shallow track -> shallow track -> shallow to flat and flat to shallow -> shallow track -> shallow track -> steep track instead of just -> steep -> steep to shallow to flat to shallow. If might not look as smooth when zoomed in. But it looks a heck lot better.
And for that blue coaster in the last screen that's in the water. Change colors it blends in way too much with the water. Try a color that'll compliment the water in turn complimenting the coaster itself.
Just giving advice because you remind me a lot of my old playing days. -
JDP Offline
brings back memories of when i first started way back. reminds me of an in game scenario
-JDP -
cuda Offline
I thank all of you for the advice, Next time you see this park hopefully It will look more better Then it is right now.
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