(Archive) Advertising District / Faas' Factory
- 24-May 11
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SSSammy Offline
there is an overuse of the crazy paving/wall object and they blend into eachother. try interjecting dirt path to break the monotony. -
highroll3r Offline
^agreed. i also think if you do that the wooden steps wont stick out like a saw thumb. nice elevation change. i like the snack bar too but i think you can add another colour to it. either cange the roof colour or the window, sign and door colour. overall i like the atmosphere but the foilage can use some work around the water. -
highroll3r Offline
still those wooden stairs are an eyesaw. try using the quater block stairs in brown. -
Ruben Offline
Dude, seeing the size of that entrance: Is this map going to be approximately the size of pokey park? -
Thx Offline
I like the color scheme and arraingment in the starter.
I think you did a very good job balancing the colors as best as the software will allow and complemented the beige path pretty well.
And... less is more!
A small and efficient entrance makes for more room in the park, and haven't we all done our share of grandiose park entrances? *yawn*
This park's a little sweety. :wink:
Thx -
SupraSix Offline
Looking good! The thing that bothers is the Ice Cream stall. It just doesn't fit well with the area.
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