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  • csw%s's Photo
    It is time to start a general work thread for all of the RCT playing I have been doing lately. I will also keep this first post updated with overall percentages of my WIP parks, along with general screens posted in the topic.

    Gravity Gardens Redux - 20-25% - expansion stage, area planning
    More screens can be seen here

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    Some entrance shop area architecture

    Project codename "Daffy Duck" - 25-30% - theming and ride placement

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    Kiddie coaster in an 'African Safari' area

    Both parks are NCSO.
  • Xeccah%s's Photo
    You need to have a better vision as well as planning out how everything fits and looks as a cohesive whole.
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    The safari screen has a very odd mix of foliage.
  • csw%s's Photo
    Small roto-drop ride.
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  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    Needs more around it, I think. That much empty overgrown grass doesn't look good
  • nin%s's Photo
    Nice to see someone finally use those dolphin statues.
  • csw%s's Photo

    Needs more around it, I think. That much empty overgrown grass doesn't look good

    I haven't decided what to do with that yet...if you see empty grass in any of these screens, it probably means I haven't filled it in yet.

    Nice to see someone finally use those dolphin statues.


    I know! They're such nice statues
  • Twiggy%s's Photo

    Nice to see someone finally use those dolphin statues.

    Besides yourself, of course.
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  • Luketh%s's Photo
    Duude, egyptian theme? Sweet! I like this screen, although replacing that grass (which I understand is unfinished) with sand would have made the whole thing feel more "deserty."

    I'm not so sure about the sandstone blocks on top of the building to the right, either. I'm not sure if they're just chillin' or if they're supposed to be the building's AC unit or something. I'd also suggest adding some details to that top floor; maybe more chairs. It looks rather plain with just two planters, y'know?

    Overall, I like the atmosphere of the screen. I'm happy to see that Sphinx for some reason.. not sure why. :)
  • Fizzix%s's Photo
    Those flat roofs are pretty boring. I'd try changing up the shape of buildings more.
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  • Lotte%s's Photo
    you should post to reddit more often, i haven't seen you around there lately, last time i saw something yours was during the april contest, a park that ended up winning a bronze accolade here (turtle hills)
  • Hex%s's Photo
    I like the structure itself but it's a bit gray. I don't get having the tables and benches on top of the pboto booth. It is a very clean cut NCSO screen, and you are very good at clean NCSO atmospheres.

    -S.C.
  • Mattk48%s's Photo
    Im getting a dull factory vibe from it. I agree with SC, too grey, needs colour.
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    I'm seeing steady improvement through the screens on this page.
  • nin%s's Photo
    That last screen reminds me of Enchanted Elements a lot. Good job.
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    This last one is my favorite so far. I think more "muddy grass" or just grass instead of the dark sand would bring more color to the screen, and might be all it needs.
  • csw%s's Photo
    Thank you everyone, advice will be taken into consideration. I have addressed the 'grayness' of the screen already, and it's partially my fault for focusing on that specific building.

    New screen: Wild West Bumper Cars
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    The wild west theme has not been fully implemented yet. Loosely inspired by the Rough Riders bumper cars at Holiday World & Splashin' Safari

    EDIT: Also, updated percentage in first post. New codename "Daffy Duck".
  • Faas%s's Photo
    I don't know man. I think it's pretty boring. The walls look plain and there is not much going on. I like the small bits of foliage though.

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