Custom Scenery Exchange / New object site

  • tom25489%s's Photo
    (edit : this is to Metal)

    rely?

    can you say why?
    how could i make it good to you?
    could you do better?

    btw sircursealot...rcnut is referring to PAs stuff...not TTs or other ppl.
  • sircursealot%s's Photo
    Yeah, cuz nut's stuff is soooooooo much better than PA's...
  • tom25489%s's Photo
    this has just turned out to be an argument topic rather than a topic advertising a site....

    think i'll post a new topic myself when i get the theme finished
  • Madhollander%s's Photo
    To all that think NE has a Agrassive vibe or sumthing...

    so what if people are a little harsh or sumthing, at least you know what they think, they dont think its shitty and praise you, no they think its shitty so they say its shitty, but if they think it's good, they will let you know that to, at least here you know what your up to.

    i never really liked NE but i found out that because everyone here is honest and fair and give help, some masterpieces have been made/are in the works.
    maybe it's been said a little rude sometimes, but everyone can have a bad day or just be a assh0le.

    now that that's outta my system, i lost a bunch of custom scenery because of a virus (good way to clean up the objectdata list, but a little over the top I.M.H.O. ;) ), is there a site where i can download ToonTowner and Cougar's scenery ?
  • Bluddah%s's Photo
    lol ...
    RCTNUT ! although your sceneries don't be reallt good ... i congrulate you.
    Why ?
    you worked, and not only to judges the other works with some "ohhhhh" "ahhhh"" like others. Make more sceneries GUYZ !!! after you'll come to judge.
    And i congrulate you beacuse you have create an altercation ... SO FUNNY !

    we can judge, but i think some mature personns can do without negative words. A "I don't like it" is a better than a "it's a S***". And if you don't like ... don't download and shut up.

    Bluddah (the peacemaker :angel: )
  • Toon%s's Photo

    here are the actual objects on their own

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    Ok...

    here are the problems I see with your objects.

    Stick Walls - actually look like a good alteration of the existing object, I would have to see them in person to really see if the alterations are well drawn. The door piece does not look good to me, but I'd have to see it to give you any suggestions.

    Tree Stump - also looks as though you chopped down one of the existing trees so I've no complaints with its appearance. Not a bad idea at all.

    Bonfire - This is the first piece I have real suggestions for. The object look like it is rendered in 2 dimensions. The view has to be as if you are looking down from a 30 degree angle to make it appear 3-d like the other objects in the game. I'm assuming this object is animated and would be curious to see how smoothly the animation runs.

    Rooves - Easy enough, and no major problems, though I'm not sure about the texturing of the sloped side.

    Stick & Leaf Litter Pieces - The sticks look ok, but the lighting appears to be off a little. I'm a little unsure of uses for this piece, but it does not look bad. The piece with the leaves looks very sloppy and undetailed tho. I'd have to see a better view, but my first impression of this is not good at all.

    Cabin - I looks flat and one dimensional. You need lighting contrast on the different sides of the building. The graphic looks extremely undetailed compared to the objects in the game. This object needs much more care and time before it would be ready for release.

    Rock - Seriously you should just scrap this one. There is really nothing good to say about it. Sorry.

    Water Pieces - I'm not even sure what some of these are supposed to represent. I assume that some of them are running water pieces and cannot give an opinion from the pics. The two with the white lines do not look good tho. The white looks like it was drawn in with a pencil tool. If you want to edit images and keep the right level of detail you really have to do it pixel by pixel.

    Pump? - I don't even know if that is what the little piece is, but it's too small for me to comment on.

    Hope this is helpful.
  • sircursealot%s's Photo

    Pump? - I don't even know if that is what the little piece is, but it's too small for me to comment on.

    Get your eyes checked. ;) It's a peep fishing. :)
  • Toon%s's Photo

    Pump? - I don't even know if that is what the little piece is, but it's too small for me to comment on.

    Get your eyes checked. ;) It's a peep fishing. :)

    Oi! I'm old you know...can't see so well. In that case it looks fine!
  • tom25489%s's Photo
    :yup:

    now thats the kinda feedback i'm looking for!
    a review of each object and how it could be improved.
    + this is from someone who does objects and does them great so i can trust your suggestions/opinions.

    Stick Walls : I could improve the edges of the windows. They don't seem to be smooth.

    Tree Stump : Yep just cut off an existing object.

    Bonfire : I have been commented on the look before. I would agree it looks 2D. The size compared to a peep is something to look into...i think changing it to a 1/4 would be suitable.

    Rooves : Yes the sides need to be improved...got to make the sides smooth and level

    Sticks + Dirt : I'll see what i can do.

    Cabin/hut : Lets say this was drawn with Paint using a hut from the game as a template. Yet again need to make the sides level/smooth

    Rocks : Yes i can agree with you there. I'm going to scrap those anyway.

    Water Pieces : One is flowing water. I only have one view of this. It can be placed under or on water. The tiles were drawn without any use of other objects. Getting every view right can be tricky.
    The other is a fish jumping from the water. You would have to see the animation to get a gd opinions on it. In game it looks reasonably gd. I will look into it and see what i can improve.

    Pump? : Are you referring to the object above the rock? If so that is fishing peep. I've made a few alterations since the pic and have done all the views for it. There is a pic at my site with the fishing peeps in all their views.

    EDIT : Ah you know it's a fishing peep now
  • Hevydevy%s's Photo
    An electric theme, hmmm... interesting. The forest theme is kinda boring, it looks like some of the stuff already in the game. I like the fishing peep though.

    Maybe I'll download,
    Hevydevy B)
  • tom25489%s's Photo
    what do you think of the electric theming? (download to see them properly..as most of them are animated)

    just to let you know everything above isn't the whole theme...there's still plenty to do! (requests are accepted)

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