(Archive) Advertising District / Project: CLR
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 13-October 04
				 
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 VC15SA
			
			
				
				
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		Yeah, the station does look pretty good. Although I'm not feeling the swampy theme. At least not from this screen. - 
						
 OhioCoasteRFreaK36
			
			
				
				
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		Swamp theme is no more, more like...earth..yeah I said that in my post didn't I? Nope guess I didn't yeah it isnt swamp anymore, the sign into the zone says welcome to earth
			
			
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 Turtle
			
			
				
				
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		That's exactly what i meant! Nice one...
Take the bush fences off the rocks at the top, leave them blank. Hooray for using the classy flowers, but take them off the landscape, and just have them bordering the path. I think that would make the natural look flow a bit better.
That foliage is superb. - 
						
 OhioCoasteRFreaK36
			
			
				
				
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		Thanks Turtle! I will take out the hedges on the top of it.
Keep with the comments I like the tips
			
			
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		I, actually, like this. It's more colorful (both literally, and figuratively), with better use of landscaping, than most anything being built at the moment. Very nice. - 
						
			
		
		
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Don't say actually, it demeans your comment.I, actually, like this. It's more colorful (both literally, and figuratively), with better use of landscaping, than most anything being built at the moment. Very nice.
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That is, actually, why I said "actually". I wanted to demean my comment.Don't say actually, it demeans your comment.
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 JKay
			
			
				
				
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		You're avatar is starting to bug me for some reason OCF
 
But, about the screen; Very nice. I espcially like the alpine-ish foliage and the splashs of green path; it makes for a really unique atmosphere. The queue line work is top-notch. One thing i don't really like is the underground section of 2x2 path. I dont understand why that has to be underground,..?
Anyway, proceed on...
			
			
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		PBJ Offline
you can have it if you ask
The combo of green/red/yellow is super.
i must say that im not a huge fan of showing the entrens and exit of a ride. but in this case it is fine that you did it this way. IMO it´s hard to make a real good "station" for a flat ride but like i said before it´s fine..
the only thing i´d chance is the fariation of the folwoers you use... put some red or yellowgreen flowers between them
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 tyandor
			
			
				
				
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		Okay, the upper part of the screen is fine, but the building below needs some texture replacement. You used the wooden wall too much there and unfortunatly the colors can't save it. - 
						
			
		
		
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		Not bad. I like the atmosphere you have going, but I'm not liking the light green brick walls you have, it seems too, "odd" for me. - 
						
			
		
		
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		Good design, but I don't like the red/green colored blocks over the path. They clash too much in my opinion... Also, perhaps some windows on the section to the left/rear?
Looks good overall, although a bit unfinished... - 
						
			
		
		
 Turtle
			
			
				
				
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		The transition between walls and roof looks strange... not sure what you could do though.
Foliage is nice, and the red works... - 
						
			
		
		
 Metropole
			
			
				
				
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		Sorry to say it, but it's very average. It's just so simple, has very little detail or anything to make it stand out. The roof is dull. There's just nothing there. It isn't bad, and probably looks fine in the park, but it's not the kinda thing I would show in a screen. Sorry
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