Park / Wingspan

4 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Mulder%s's Photo

    I really like the woodland setting here, lots of trees and plants and it looks natural.

    Good job on the foliage and landscaping, love a dense forest.

    Also digging that elevated wooden path to the zipline and that wooden walkway down by the water. Gives a good atmosphere.

     

    I think the coaster layout is great as well, nice, spacious and flows well. Some of the architecture could probably use a little more detail, but that's a minor gripe.

     

    Think this is the best work I've seen from you, so thought I'd leave a comment. Nice level up.

    I'm a sucker for really nature-focused parks, so enjoyed this. Great job.

  • FredD%s's Photo

    Lovely piece of rct here with a big focus on foliage which you did very well. Especially like the waterfront. I also liked the station of the coaster, great color choice. I do think the roof maybe should've gone a unit higher though.

     

    Other buildings/structures were nice but could use some more detailing. The base of the Starflyer was one of the things I'd like to see more details in it to make it less bare and boring. Think about lines on the ground or path patterns to mark safety distances for example. Ride OP booth too for extra realism points ;)

     

    Coaster was nice too, had good pacing and some flowy bits. Not a fan of the first drop but after that it was a nice flowy part until the turn after the corkscrew. After that, it feels a bit uninspired and meandering to the end. 

     

    Camping spot was charming.

  • Lurker%s's Photo

    Really pleasant, nice nature foliage (Especially the wetlands) and it definitely has good nature park atmosphere. Nice details too with things like the small dam and picinic area amoung others. Coaster flows well and and fits the theme nicely, good choice of ride type and the colors work well. 

    Also, I like the music, makes it even more relaxing to look through.

  • chorkiel%s's Photo

    Also thought this was pleasant. The natural elements made for a nice theme. Building a subtle coaster was a good choice.

    Main thing here that could use improvement was the architecture and fencing. The buildings could have used some detailing or more unique textures to be a little bit more interesting. The fences just seemed a bit thick. Especially on the treetop trail.

    The nature is a beautiful backdrop so I get why you didn't build extensive themeing on the rides. The huts being more interesting and the fences more subtle probably would have improved that.