Park / Midwest Adventure Amusement Park

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  • geewhzz%s's Photo

    Midwest Adventure Amusement Park Logo


    It’s been quite awhile since the community has seen a club park grace the New Element front page. With members sometimes not playing the game consistently, it’s hard to coordinate building parks through a club effort. Formed in August of 2009, RCT-Pro members have individually been showing great progress in skill, both in the Advertising District and the Place-To-Release-Your-Parks Land. However, RCT-Pro has shown as an entity that they have the determination and skill to complete a park to be proud of. Members Colorado-Fan, prodigy, Grabster, DelLagos, Turbin3, and Stanman all had a hand in creating the wonderful bronze winner: Midwest Adventure Amusement Park. Read On...

  • Ozone%s's Photo
    Well, looking over this I probably voted it a little too high. That is the great thing about the panel though, as I think it got the accolade that it deserves. It was a very pleasant park, I liked the support work on the wooden, and the little invert was nice. I didn't realize that so many people were involved. It was pretty small, but all in all very charming.
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Come on, this park deserves more replies than this. I thought it was pretty good.

    Pros
    + The woody. Awkward layout, but it looked pretty near the waterfalls.
    + Consistently detailed
    + Some pretty unique ideas, like the inverted.

    Cons
    - Inconsistent foliage... You should use one style for the whole park or at least make it flow more.
    - The steep trainbridges
    - You put effort in making the park peepable... but where the fuck are the peeps? Why are the rides closed? Maybe some life would've made this Silver.
    - Bare in places
    - Why has the sign in the fountain in front of the entrance footers? Is it that heavy?

    All in all this was fun to explore and a well deserved bronze. Next time make something bigger! The quality was there but it needs more quantity if you want higher than bronze or silver I think.
    12/20

    Well done and congratulations.
  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    well done guys, strong bronze.
    it was really lacking in consistancy and flow.
    nothing really linked for me.
  • turbin3%s's Photo
    Thanks Ozone and Liampie. (EDIT: and Sammy) :p
    Moreover thanks to the people, who did the write up and the logo...dont know who did them...
    And finally thanks to the people, who build the park with me.

    Edited by Turbin3, 25 November 2009 - 02:19 PM.

  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    logo : split
    write: jusmith
    both are fantastic.
    :D
  • posix%s's Photo
    I'm pretty sure it'll take a while until this park loses its spot as the 'Strongest Bronze Park'.

    I thought parts of it were fantastic, other parts were a little lacklustre. Still was a joy to look at.
  • turbin3%s's Photo
    Thanks po6 for your nice words. :)

    Well, 0.08 points missing to silver, that's not much.

    I'd love to hear, what Steve thinks about the park, he voted with 7.
  • prodigy%s's Photo
    Cool, I did the worst Bronze-Park with a score of 10.30 (the worst park ever released on NE) and I took part in the best Bronze Park with a score of 11.92. That´s funny, I like that!

    Thanks to split and jusmith, I love the logo and the write-up, thank you so much!
    Also thanks to all voters, the whole NE-Team and everyone who downloaded / is going to download this park.
    Congratulation to the other builders!

    Best regards, prod
  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    shut up prod i love your bronze.
  • Splitvision%s's Photo
    Glad you like the logo, I wasn't completely sold on it myself to be honest. Agree on jusmith's write-up, solid as hell. As for the park, it is well worthy of it's achieved score. The archy was kinda simple but nevertheless good. I liked the parking lot a lot (...) aswell. I liked the open feeling of it all.

    A little more content overall, like more coasters/flatrides and other features, would be nice. I'm not saying you should have packed more stuff in, rather that you should have used a larger map. With six builders that wouldn't be much to ask I feel. That was the main con for me, along with the somewhat sloppy layout for the woodie. Really good job from all of you though, good luck with future projects!
  • Levis%s's Photo
    gee'ed :p ?
  • Steve%s's Photo

    I'd love to hear, what Steve thinks about the park, he voted with 7.

    Now looking back at it, maybe I was a little too harsh, but sorry to say I still wouldn't have given the park a bronze. I could sit here and talk about all the things I found faulted within the park but I won't. I just felt like there were too many negatives over positives. I will say you still have a park to be proud of because I did enjoy it somewhat, but there were just countless things I personally wouldn't do when building that knocked it down for me. Well done on the accolade though, and I mean it when I say I still look forward to whatever projects you guys have going on.
  • turbin3%s's Photo
    Thanks Splitvision.

    Steve, thanks too, maybe you'll like the parks which are in progess more. :p
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    I felt more could be done with this park.

    The main coaster was obviously the CCI Woodie, however it didn't feel like the main coaster as it was shoved in the corner. I understand that the coaster was built to interact with the terrain but it wasn't an amazing layout and felt too forced. It was like you built the terrain with it's sole purpose to accomodate the coaster, which doesn't happen in the real world as it would be far cheaper to just build the coaster without building a terrain for it.
    I think if that small area of landscaping was built more into the rest of the park the woodie would look better and wouldn't look forced.

    There wasn't really anything in the park that held my attention, the lack of architecture and flat rides being the case here. Also thought it was odd adding in the water park. It's too small to add anything special to the park and I think the park would have benefitted from another coaster being placed in the space it took up rather than the two waterslides and selection of pools.

    Well done on Bronze. I look forward to the next club park to be released, it's nice to finally have another decent club in the community.
  • WhosLeon%s's Photo
    Sorry for bringing this up, but i deserve some %'s from this park, i built the restaurant in the top left corner of the map, my name on NE got changed by louis from grabsterr to WhosLeon, just sayin! I hope you guys can change this and give me like 3% or something for my work :p
  • trav%s's Photo
    Are you not the missing guy who has 9%?
  • WhosLeon%s's Photo
    oh yea, that could be it.
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Fixed. Still don't understand what happened to your other account...
  • turbin3%s's Photo
    good old rct-pro...

    still in love with the park.