Park / Escalante River Falls
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07-October 03
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My basic problem was while it had alot of creativity and effort put into it, the end result just didnt look good in my opinion. The one standout thing on the map, the giant tree, was porrly done in my opinion, just a tangle of track that didn't look right. The architecture looks amatuer at best, it just doesnt come together like Nate's stuff normally does. The ride in my opinion lacks any real direction other than going through a bunch of pretty scenes which really arent all that pretty. Which brings me to my biggest complaint, this park banks its entire existance on the landscape because there is nothing else there... and the landscape is decisivly boring, just fails to get anything going really. Maybe im missing what all of you see in it, but it looks like a whole lot of notihng to me.
Sorry, I just don't feel this is your best work.
that you didn't pull it off too well. Your timing in such matters is amateur (though I don't blame you, considering it's a fairly unused concept among most). You see, we waited just a BIT too long... sort of reminds me of lord of the rings book: its really good, but the expansive amounts of explanation just made me want to put down the book, his timing in storytelling is akin to yours in this park.
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I can sense Nate's influence from his love of architecture (as a subject and art) here. This is totally about the experience. Put yourself in this thing and you'll love it. You have to use your imagination a bit--which will turn some people off, but to those who appreciate this sort of stuff (and I see the same sort of idea in you City of God), it hits home very nicely. Nate's trying to be new and unique. Forget Frank Lloyd Wright, Natelox is obliterating the box.
And for me, this all amounts to some very nice work.
stories can't have just one spike in the action...
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most stories have this pattern, in that there is an early action that sets the stage for the anticipation of the later action. Not all follow this, but no story only has ONE place where all the action happens (some movies do, but they are regaurded as boring by most sane people).
I didn't think much of the so called tree either, must've taken some work and I give props to you for that but it doesn't IMO actualy look anything remotely like a tree
Thanks and congrats to Themeparkmaster.
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