Screenshot / Torpedo Run - Station

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 9 years ago

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  theflowdiskord Offline

  here's the entrance

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  Austin55 Offline

  That's quite neat and original. Love how you've done the fins.

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  Recurious Online

  Wow, I absolutely love this station and the overall idea, it looks freaking great and the idea is just so cool. The green thing over the queue line looks great and the entrance to the submarine also looks really cool with the small divider in the middle, I could see that in real life in any theme park. However I'm not really a big fan of the layout which you showed in the other screenshot to be honest, it looks a bit forced and doesn't have a lot of flow imo.

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  Stoksy Offline

  The actual submarine is really out of scale in my opinion. The top looks quite good, but the part of the submarine closest to the water is too square in comparison. I would personally either just have the top portion, or show much more of the submarine itself. Possibly even extend it all the way to the edge of the water.

   

  Also, the monorail and steeplechase fence is waaaay too curvy and unsupported. Definitely add some columns so it doesn't look so odd, and also consider adding in more straight sections. The second screen is fine, but the curves in the top screen seem largely unnecessary.

   

  Pretty interesting idea overall, but the queue line should probably be fixed - floating peeps is never a good idea if it can be avoided.

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  navalin Offline

  Very cool. My only gripe with this screen is that I think the area surrounding the submarine could be more organic (diagonal paths, make the pond less rectangular, etc). I think you're going for an artificially made pool, but I'd round it out and make it look like the sub is in some sort of jungle estuary or something.

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