Your building are too tall, at least for my tastes. Kind of give an odd freaky vibe that maybe your trying to achieve. The foliage is little oddly colored as well, but again, maybe that's on purpose. I do like the forms and the way you handled the ride though, pretty cool looking tbh.
Why do you have a two-lane car ride? I'm really intrigued by the swan going by the window, is that a ride?
Looks like an improvement over your old work. Keep practicing and you'll get there. Nice structure.
Admittedly I could've given a better shot. I also could have made this a little less sloppy (certainly wish the game didn't crash as often as it did) but nevertheless am glad to be working outside of the comfort zone.
The building houses a wooden wild mine ride.
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