Screenshot / Rafting

20-July 15

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Coasterbill Offline

I like the right part of this screen but the right part not so much.

But how do you feel about the right part?
posted 9 years ago
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ottersalad Offline

The wooden bridge on the bottom of the screen is really cool. Wonderful screen but I agree that there should be other browns used.
posted 9 years ago
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RCTER2 Offline

Brown is a theme!!!!!
posted 9 years ago
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Faas Offline

I meant left. Sorry. I guess I wasn't right about what I left in my comment.

Edit: F this, I like the right part, and not the left part.
posted 9 years ago
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Steve Offline

It's not so much the colors as it is the foliage throwing this off for me. You need some taller, green trees to offset the brown in the architecture. I love the little waterfalls coming down from the loading platform, but add some small shoreline in other spots where the water meets the building for a lush overgrown look and then I think you have something truly inspired here. Also, even using the grey brick you started in the top left would help! Great job.
posted 9 years ago
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wheres_walto Offline

Making it a point to use less pale brown and gray while mixing in different colors would really help your work
posted 9 years ago
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Xeccah Offline

Steve is right. thick, lush foliage with some tall grasses and magenta/purple/deep red flowers would do good. Also it would help to accent some stuff with the chocolate brown, using more of that nice peach wood roofing, and cleaning up the structure in general. ironically the worst stuff in this screen is the elements that you ripped from BGA.

Also those awnings are a serious missed color opportunity.
posted 9 years ago
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Cocoa Offline

when I opened it without checking I thought it was a new bga screen so that should be telling I suppose. Its good, but so classic pizza. go find some new inspiration! haha
posted 9 years ago
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][ntamin22 Offline

Great work from a planning standpoint - I love the visibility of the station/loading from the main path and the bridge entrance for the queue. I think a different fence color in the queue might be a good start on the brown overload.
posted 9 years ago
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Da_Cool Offline

The square in the loading platform makes it look weird and unfinished. You could probably counteract some of the brown-ness by adding white like you did in the diagonal roof;
posted 9 years ago
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inthemanual Offline

The "square" is some diagonal bracing between the poles, not something on the platform.
posted 9 years ago
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PizzaWurscht Offline

thanks for the feedback, but there is nothing copied. i want to build a B&M hyper with a big africa/adventure feeling/theming. it`s not inspired on any park. i had a simple idea of an open rafting station on a river and a bridge.

but thanks for the big amount of feedback ^^
posted 9 years ago
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