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  • zxbiohazardzx%s's Photo

    maybe some pirate theme stuff or some extra detail near the hut. the hut currently seems to be a bit lonely and can use some more path or something

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    What's there is good.  With regards to adding more here, I feel that a lack of land somewhat limits that.  Perhaps you could create a ship of some sort, maybe with the coaster going over/through it?  Either that or a floating wooden island or a dock?

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    I think the layout itself and the way its polarizing itself with the water is making this screen suffer. Please reconsider your design choices in regards to the water coaster.

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    A water coaster. I am very content with the layout of this coaster (not entirely visible obviously), and the scenery. Still I feel like something's missing, a certain piece of atmosphere. What would improve the atmosphere here?

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