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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 9 years ago
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Belgium FredD Offline

    Why isn't the Buffalo meadow blue-white? Zero percent, start over again!

    posted 9 years ago
  • zxbiohazardzx%s's Photo
    Netherlands zxbiohazardzx Offline

    Glad you added that 2x2 building, really helps

    posted 9 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline

    Not bad! However, it does look like all the other log flumes you ever did. 

    posted 9 years ago
  • Julow%s's Photo
    France Julow Offline

    I love this, the log flume is very original while remaining simple and consistent with the rest of the area. The only thing I don't really like is the wooden NCSO fences you used on the station and for the paths. 

    Oh and those bulls. ♥︎ 80% for me

    posted 9 years ago
  • Jappy%s's Photo
    Belgium Jappy Offline


    Why isn't the Buffalo meadow blue-white? Zero percent, start over again!

     

    Funny. Veeeery funny. :p 

    posted 9 years ago
  • G Force%s's Photo
    United States G Force Online
    Guess the only thing I'd say is that the roof over the lift is a bit weird at the bottom. Feels like the slop should only go down half way and then flatten out for the last quarter tile, rather than slope down for the entire tile.

    Oh, and I guess the fact it's a bit close to the map edge. Maybe 3-4 more tiles and it would be fine, I think it's just a tad too close at the moment.
    posted 9 years ago
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    United States ][ntamin22 Offline

    This is pretty neat; I definitely get the Zoo vibe.  Still feels a little empty, somehow.

    posted 9 years ago
  • A n d r e w%s's Photo
    United States A n d r e w Offline
    I think you should try playing around with the color of the wooden roofs on the station. Maybe a dull red? Also the brown path would look a lot better without the crazy paving tiles I think. Other than that I really like this.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Steve%s's Photo
    United States Steve Offline
    By far your best work. Great stuff with the lift facades there.

    Only criticism is maybe the exhibit could use some love. Also, maybe a different fence? Seems almost unsafe to have a several hundred pound buffalo behind nothing but two slats of wood. Maybe even try sinking it one unit? Not sure.

    Keep it up!
    posted 9 years ago
  • imlegos%s's Photo
    United States imlegos Offline

    Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo 

    posted 9 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline

    <3

    posted 9 years ago
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    United States CoasterCreator9 Offline

    Love:

    - Rapids layout

    - Small path side buildings that add a wonderful atmosphere

    - Seating area overlooking the lake

     

    To consider:

    - Fence cohesion

    - Raft station could use some fence or structure to it

    - Agree with Steve about the exhibit itself

    posted 9 years ago
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Belgium FredD Offline


    Buffalo buffalo AA Gent buffalo buffalo AA Gent buffalo buffalo AA Gent buffalo buffalo AA gent

     

     

    Fixed.

    posted 9 years ago
  • Jappy%s's Photo
    Belgium Jappy Offline

    Thanks all for the replies and suggestions. Gonna take them into consideration! :)

     

    I've been saying that this park will be probably finished in the summer, but if I'm able to maintain the current momentum, it actually might be finished in about a month.

    posted 9 years ago
  • mintliqueur%s's Photo
    Sweden mintliqueur Offline

    Best screen yet from this project! Let's hope you can keep your momentum so we get to check this out in game soon!

    posted 9 years ago

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