Screenshot / Smuggler's Bend @ Oasis [WIP]

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  • Timothy Cross%s's Photo

    Some odd stuff is going on with this screen, and I don’t think that it’s your best work so far. Concerning your style, however, it seems very grid-oriented. Others may complain that the grid is thus too evident in your work. But I say keep it that way as it accentuates your style and makes it stand out as a unique aesthetical design. If you lose that, you’ll lose much of what makes your work special. 

  • Ge-Ride%s's Photo

    Interesting textures but it lacks unity. So many colors, different types of windows, and so on. And aside from the apparently unfinished left edge there's not much negative space. I think that you'll find a way to make it work, it just needs some finessing.

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