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  • Lotte%s's Photo

    first of all finish your screens! with all the unfinishedness you've got out there it'd be nice to see something finished. but overall it's decent and i'd keep doing this, i don't know about the trees on the rooftops though

  • ida%s's Photo
    I know, but i thought seeing as this is a new park it'd be okay to upload it.
  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    I can't quite believe what I'm seeing; I reverse freefall coaster! I didn't think people made them anymore.

     

    Don't know much about LL so can't really judge how 'good' the screen is but personally what's there seems nice; the barrels as supports are not great but I think that maybe the rooftop trees would make more sense once the surroundings are finished, ie if it was an overgrown jungle that had expanded towards the 'village'.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    This is really nice, but it would look much better finished. It's nice to see someone use the reverse freefall coaster.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    it's not a bad attempt.

     

    but LL is much more than throwing random textures together and adding random objects.

     

    it needs a lot of cleaning up. try to keep your textures simple don't add random objects in an attempt to add detail.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    I'm actually a fan of the roof structures and textures, it looks very meso-american.  The potted yucca plants are a nice touch; maybe consider using them or other smaller foliage instead of trees in/around the buildings and saving the big trees for areas where they would have a little more room.

  • csw%s's Photo

    I agree with Louis, it's a bit random. Try to choose a few less textures and see what happens. 

  • Poke%s's Photo

    I like it.

  • ida%s's Photo
    I've already changed some of the wooden walls (you know, the brown ones and the more red ones). Now they're all brown.
  • ida%s's Photo

    Version two.

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  • Lotte%s's Photo

    thanks for putting the screenshot in the comments this time

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    Good developments there.   The buildings away from the main path look jumbled, even if they have the same amount of detail, because they don't have the large plain area of the path for visual contrast.  Leaving some empty space like the (crop?) fields in can help things read better.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    This feels better, I still think some of the foliage on the roofs are odd but generally it feels a lot cleaner.

     

    This is much better than your RCT2 work btw.

  • Poke%s's Photo

    Definitely agree with Louis, continue doing LL.

  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    jungle foliage should be thicker, but that might just be a product of unfinished-ness. Also, why did you put plants on the roof? nobody can water those, nobody can see those.

  • Faas%s's Photo

    Yeah because forests are there because there are people that can water them. 

  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    It's not a forest naturally growing on a roof though, it's a planter, which would need to be watered in most climates.

  • ida%s's Photo

    This is much better than your RCT2 work btw.

     

    Isn't that because all the LL work is overly simple to make?

  • Faas%s's Photo

    No it's because you're not good at RCT2.

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