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Fantastic start from what I can see.
-JDP

panther33, are you mp3mystro?
screens are looking pretty nice!

Interesting way of advertising. Nice.

^ i know its like hes going somewhere and just so happens to spot a theme park bery high in the air on a plane, just show us close ups all ready, please!

Looks good so far, panther. But it would be nice to see some closeups. And although that it is interesting way of adveritisng, I would say save it for a topic of your own here in the AD.

Dark_Horse

Just something I've been working on...

Edited by Oneofakind0490, 21 April 2009 - 01:17 PM.

Colours arent great. Architecture could use a bit of work and the foliage too.

But the ending of the layout is quite nice.

The layout's great... The colors are really hard to take.

Ride6

Cedarpoint6- Thanks.

Geewhzz- Thanks that means a lot from one of my idols!

JDP- Thanks

Posix- No I am not. Im new here. Most of my work was on RCPro. Never finished them though. Thanks

Louis- I figured that too. Thanks

Goliath123- It was a teaser shot. I wanted to show an overview without showing everything.

Darkhorse- Thanks

Close-ups are coming guys! Thanks for all the support so far!

-Chris Bachorik-

Edited by panther33, 21 April 2009 - 04:16 PM.

Start topic soon?

Panther, those aerial shots look promising so far, can't wait to see some up and close ones...

Oneofakind, the layout's kinda boring how it practically does the same thing twice there... and it's just too much green.

Maybe at the end of the week? I want to get more done.

Oneofakind0490 get rid of the brake section man. If you get that out of there you'll have a nice looking design.
-JDP

Thanks everyone for the suggestions. New color definitely and I will work on the foliage. I don't know what to put in between the ride but I will work on it.

JDP the brake was put there because the ride was to fast during the end. I will try and find a way to get rid of it somehow.

Edited by Oneofakind0490, 22 April 2009 - 08:00 AM.

^Yeah I figured that is what was. But when you're going to make a design, try to have the pacing down packed along with speed; that way you don't need to have brakes. Here are some tips:
-Larger elements.
-Smaller Elements.
-Reduce main drop or launch speed.
-Throw in an extra helix or two.
-Change main elements.

Those are just the main suggestions that will help you work this out on your own. In my opinion, your finish is pretty nice so maybe (if its a rocket coaster) reduce the launch speed and make the first few segments smaller in size. Maybe make this coaster like Rita: the Queen of Speed or Desert Race.
-JDP

Edited by JDP, 22 April 2009 - 08:28 AM.

Close up..



What is this?

it's a little cramped, but the colors work well. i like it.

I'm liking it..

Eh, nothing special. The inside fence should be removed. You have floating blocks. The archy seems kind of blocky.

Dark_Horse

^ better than what you'll ever make