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MGM's Grand Restaurant, Grease Monkey's Garage & 5 Star Gas Station

Apologies for the unfinishedness behind the facades, I wanted a few comments on the fronts before working on the insides of the buildings and then finishing them up.
Just a little explanation, Grease Monkey's Garage & 5 Star Gas Station will have a gift shop inside, and inside Grease Monkey's Garage will be a Vintage Car ride taking a tour of the garage. It's all peepable too.

All comments and critism welcome

Love the creativity! Wish it was finished a bit more but you've explained why. Good work. Can't wait to see more.

meh.



Ignore the green please.

I don't think the incline fits right before the block brakes into the lift, it doesn't look like good pacing. OVerall looks good though.

Dark_Horse

damnit, why do you have to be so good?

Louis, I've never really liked your work, but this is stunning!
Maybe change the white-black fences around the 'car' to yellow-black. And I don't really like the glitches with the path...

Thanks for the comments.

J K - Thanks! Once I've done a bit more i'll create a topic so you'll see more then
Zodiac - Cheers bud!
Sulakke - Haha, yeah Thanks, it's nice to know you like something of my work finally. And the glitches with the path is meant to resemble cracked/worn pathing.

Looks good.
When I see the left building I have to ask what happened to your Sagrada Familia?

Wow. Please finish that, Louis!

The building on the right is stunning!

Yeah, this is by far my favorite thing from you!

Hey Guys,
well it´s my first post here at NE, I´ve been watching the forums for some time now.
As this is the Dump-Place I´ll show some older Screens.


Schwarzkopf Love


Stuntshow


Personal Project

Edited by Stanman, 18 April 2009 - 02:54 AM.

Yay!

3rd screen is really cool!

In the first screen I would change the colours of the trees. The lighter brown fits those trees better if I remeber.
I can't see much on the second screen. The buildings look a bit blocky but I can't really see it because of the size of the screen.
The third screen is nice. The only complainment I have is that the V looks to thin on the downside. Owh and maybe make the entrance a bit higher.

Looking forward to see this in the add!

stanman, i think the 3rd screen looks pretty awesome! welcome at ne

Lovely Stanman. Welcome to NE...btw love the avatar!

Thanks for the warm welcome and I´m glad you all like the screens

Tolsimir: thx
ivo: I´ll try to implement your advice!
posix: thx
geewhzz: That´s the reason I chose this avatar.

tehe.





still part of that park.

Very nice i like it a lot

Hey guys, Im new here, but I am a member at Roller Coaster Pro. Some of you may know my work. I just wanted to see how you guys comment on my recent project. (to be released) This picture is un-finished. I know you guys make a BIG deal out of that, but this will be one of the few that will be "Un-finished"



Hopefully I can get some help dropping the enterances/exits.

Thanks for letting me join NeDesigns!

-Chris Bachorik-