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Here's another picture of me experimenting with architecture. I haven't done anything on the actual park that I want to show.



I really need feedback, it would be helpful for me to develop my style.

I think the little 1/8 brick pieces are a bit much, kinda just thrown in to get more detail. From my experiences, I've found that less is more, I always seem to get a better look without just random pieces.

First of I think the arch is perhaps 2 or 3 height units too high. It doesn't really flow for me, mostly due to there being one tower having four courners and another having 8 (or something like that). I'm not a fan of the deep blue details either. And one last thing: I dislike that all the windows are on the same level. I'd put a window on the brown brick wall (on the square tower). Sorry for coming down so hard on you But I like what you're going for, I think that it could turn into a really good building if you tweak it a bit.

But for experimenting with architecture that looks beautiful.

When you and fr3ak get some more work released you guys will be on my radar too!

it looks amazing.

not bad at all, but it needs better organization and flow.

The arch is a bit high imo, but otherwise this will look pretty cool when finished.

I'm not digging the purple. Maybe lighten it up a bit?

Other than that, it looks great.

the purple is what makes the screen.

(L) CONCEPT DRAWINGS (L)

i got a good feeling about this particular park.

all comments greatly apreiciated.

You know what to do with scenery pieces to make nice detailed buildings, its just that your buildings are just ugly to me- the colors, the overgrown foliage, the extra large windows, that long indoor balcony thing, and I'm not really sure what else, I just don't like it.

Why are the windows black and blue
Also why are there two of the same signs hung right next to each other

Anyway, the structures nice, but the details could be touched up, and you definitely could use some flowers

You gotta be careful with the contrast of jagged walls and diagonal walls. It just seems like a very forced structure.

I also don't know the purpose of the building? Its good filler architecture but I wanna see more clarity.

After that the dirt path isn't nice with the other type as its a shape that follows the structure of the building. If you put the path variation around the fountain with a north,south,east,west effect it would be nicer.

Just pushing you for better things buddy because its clear you have talent.

Darken the roof color, it looks like a floor that you forgot to put walls around.
Also, the porch (?) on the second floor wraps around a bit too much, making everything on thre right off-center.

Schwartzkopf

"Tesla"

that ladder is unsupported.

the supports are overkill, and need to be different colors.
as of now, they blend in with the track at times, and it doesnt flow well.

layout is decent i guess.

is the catwalk supposed to float in the air magically?

^It has supports. But I don't see the point of the two on the left because they're broken by another part of the ride.

-disneylhand

i see a lot of zodiac in your work cocoa

the supports are overkill

Yeah, but most compact steel coasters usually are packed with supports, they aren't meant to be the best looking coasters.

i think your biggest problem is always trying to jusitfy the comments so you dont have to change anything. listen to the critisim, it normally WILL make your park better, you should try it sometime.