(Archive) Advertising District / Zac's/ Shotguns?'s stuff thread.

how about the atmoshpere?

And can you please stop bitchfighting?

bitch fighting? who is bitch fighting? if feedback is bitch fighting that's with you...

bitch fighting? who is bitch fighting? if feedback is bitch fighting that's with you...

Not the given critisism, I thank you for that. I mean you and buckeye.


edit: totally looked past k0ngs post, i'm lauging.

Fizzix, if your reading this, your still better than me in ncso, we just have different styles.

I feel the atmosphere sort of it just doesn't have the certain spark that is needed to put it up there.

discuss.

Looks like a monster.

serpent, actually,

I wanted to see if it is good, because it is my first try at heads like that,

It's tongue looks a bit too blocky IMO. Also, the eyes are a little bit too big.

It looks like a Sesame Street character.

^That was my exact first thought haha.


I think it's the eyes, they don't look particularly serpent like.

If it's a snake, it needs teeth. Experiment with teeth possibilities.

Serpents also tend to have sharp thin tongues instead of blocky thick ones.

I don't know what you want people to say. It's nothing new, so it's hard to get excited about. It's been done before, and better.

You are getting better though. Keep playing until you build something awesome. Try themes that no-one's ever done before.

I dunno, but I love this building.




I hate MS paint croppings, it always fucks my screens

You have got to show more than just that in one screen. I mean come on, what do you want us to say?

The last entrance sucks. This one's better

I like the architecture on the pic but in my opinion, that path always screw everything. It's like pitbull, the music can be awesome but when he start rapping, the song is spoiled...

That's looking very nice, good start. Interesting shapes, and a nice setting. Be careful with those trees though, they pull all the warmth out of the screen.

I'd add some more colours in, warm colours. What with the aqua everywhere, the dull browns and the trees, it's a cold looking screen. Add some yellows, oranges, warm purples, warm greens etc., will liven it up a bit I think.

You're improving very well, though. Keep at it man.

Listen to Turtle and beware of pointless detailing (and pointless discussions; I can't say this enough), and everything will be okay.

It's great detailing but that tan path just kills it for me. Try the concrete path.