(Archive) Advertising District / Iron Wood Valley

Why're you so rude to people commenting on your stuff? Gir only said he didn't like it...no need to bite his head off.

mantis - all he did was diss the park, and not even give any advice on fixing what he did not like, so i stick with my statement. and to be honest most of the time i want to people dissing my parks, its coz im very defenceive and stuburn, but i will try to limit my outbursts in the future, ok....oh and im glad you like the park

Turtle, solB and chris - thanx for the replys

Woopssee lol my post in this topic, before.. that was an accident lol, I was looking at 2 topics at once and saw Mantis's name so I thought, Bah skip it.... lol

THis park is shaping up Nicely.Kumba. Your color usage is very cool , Althought I might suggest one small thing.A Little less Brown... lol

This park is back in gear, Sinister Oz (Penguin_BOB) has come back to finish up his salem themed section.

Im all done now and here are just a few screens of my areas





Enjoy

too much brown, man

Have you ever tried to not use brown in just one frickin section?

yeah when i fucked your mama, i only added a bit of white

thats nasty... and wrong

Worst comeback ever.

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Anyway, like I've said before, your architecture is too small. I'd also suggest to stray away from making the entire structure 2x2-ish. Add towers, etc. Go off and be more 'random' (for those retards that don't know 'detail' )...

Worst comeback ever.

I was only making a point saying that he always uses so much brown in his parks.

I was talking to Kumba... you posted while I was typing my post. Duh. You actually had a valid point, something which is hard to come by these days from you.

Nice edit there...

Ok ummm, no offence Kumba but IMO this blows.

The arhcitecture is no good and those lattice work htingys sticking out above the roofs look TERRIBLE. I understand if this was done a while ago, but I say you go back and redo it, please...

Nice edit there...

thanks man

i think its great!!!

Heres a New Screen by Sinister Oz, its so awsome

Um, whatever. It doesn't look that good to me. Oh well. At least Oz is back.

Now Kumba, would you mind telling us what is so great about it? It is good but i see nothing extraordinary, nothing to make me go, OMG that is SWEET! Nothing... so what is it? Is there something you see that i don't?

ride6

is right. The flat roof, the steel fences along the houses, the signs for both Salem Thrills and Familiar whatever, along with those two hanging things are really awful. That's nothing like his Red work.

That's a really solid screen. I like it a lot. I have only one complaint. Get rid of that blue que line. If you're interested, I have a plain tarmac que path type (that you might be able to import into a saved game file...not sure about that). Anyway, looks very nice.

I think its pretty cool. It is exactly the picture i got in my head when i read the crucible at school. I think the atmosphere is pretty good too. Itll be interesting to see how the rest of the section turns out.

Turned

http://atlas.imagema...umba/aiwv23.JPG

This Screeshot is very good.
total awesomE

I don't like the new one. There are four reasons for this. Firstly, those fences that have already been pointed out. Secondly, there's quite a bit of bare ground. Thirdly, the flat roofs level with the top of the tt roofs look awful. And fourthly, why not just hack the paths through the trainline?

Having said all that... the atmosphere is very nice in it. And I suppose it fits the park style well... most of the above is possibly personal preference.

Wow! Not only are there gallows, there's what looks like a witch-dunking thing next to that pond! Cool!