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Its alright but extremely messy. As people have said, the steel fences and lattice work around everything detract from the quality of the screen.

Clean this up a bit and it will be cool

This area is very different i like it all except the railway it doesnt look right i would hack the path through.

But the rest pf the park looks amazing so im definetly looking forword to this one.

I like the screens. The atmosphere in the park remind me of one of my own parks, TF Livingstone Fortress.

I like the architecture. It's not too detailed, and it's not too simple either. This doesn't count for the two screens of Bob's old stuff. In the first screen, the building in top is rather boring with all the wood, and in the 2nd screen, I think the building is too colorfull and too tall compared to the other achitecture. I love the 3rd and 4th screens though.

SinisterOZ wanted me to post this for him...

ride6: shut up, if I could have posted it, you might have had something better to say, keep to the topic, it is my screen

brent0s: stop badgering me about red, the "gallows" are something I like, so they're staying, the steel fences (in my mind) are used as thin borders, so I don't have such big ones (different colored 1/4 wooden walls), I like them, but I'll see what I can do, and I'll have to think of something for the flat roof on (only) the q-line house

meretrix: I'll get rid of the blue q-line, i made the sign block the little scrolly thing so i don't really have to use a q-line, i'll fix it

turned1: thanks, that's what I was trying to go for, gloomy, with references to historical facts, and the crucible

guljam: thank you

deanosrs: i'll see what I can do with the steel fences, if there wasn't bare ground, you wouldn't see anything (theming wise), I'll see what I can do with only the flat rooves on the q-line building, and I'll make all the other ones one direction, and I will hack it through the train

mantis: I'm glad you're using your imagination, too bad I purposely didn't do that, lol

sloB: i'll mess with the steel fences, but is all of the shrubbery messy too?

nemesis chris: railway will be hacked

RRP: i'll mess with the q-building to As the Crow Flies, and i do think that that entrance is large, but if i had done the mainstreet archy, it wouldn't have been, and it's staying.
   
    there might be other "subtle" theming things i've done in that screen (namely two) that you might have missed, look for them.

ummmm, no the shrubbery isn't that bad at all, but the fences and also that sign sticking out from like nowhere are what I don't like about it.