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Great little entry you got....

 

 

Thanks dude! Agree with you completely. I did originally have the roofs grey, but then I kept checking google map views of newer rides and they seemed to be more beige, albeit darker than I have. Also agree on the weenie, It was supposed to be the treehouse on top of the rock work, but I don't think it works as well as it could. 

 

Thanks for taking the time to feed back!

 

This is really great! Love your style ....

 

 

Cheers dude! Agree totally on the contrast, next time I'll be sure to keep it in mind, great point about zooming out too. Thanks for tkaing the time to write that out. 

 

Nice little submission...

 

 

Thanks man! More to come when I have the time for sure. 

Super nice. I like he spike and tophat combo a lot. 

mate love this. great interaction between the glass and the thatch. foliage is great, colors are great, and love that covered seating area. feels very real!

 

Thanks! Getting there!

 

The screen is great. The composition is flawless and technically its good too. The atmosphere would be even better if you could integrate more color in your work. Maybe add some red or yellow (bright yellow lamp posts?) to compliment the colors of the boats.

 

You're absolutely right, and thanks. You now have me makinc custom lamps...

 

This is great! Welcome to NE. Hoping to see many more screens from you

 

Thanks, more soon for sure! 

Very cool structure. Overall, this feels a little lifeless to me, but it’s a great start and I’m very excited to see more from you!

 

Agreed, and thanks!

 

Love the windows in the rock wall, however I would use the same type of rocks throughout. Get rid of the 1k ruin rocks on the bottom and extend the same style of rocks framing the windows down to where the 1k rocks are. Just so it matches. Great screen, love the atmosphere.

 

Edit - Maybe even extend that style of rock wall way back to the left to replace the brown boring fence and the stale grey concrete side of the splashdown pond.

 

I agree, it doesn't look quite right. Yeh gotta keep the dining peeps dry! 

That looks great - i love how the detailing of the glass structure isn't the victorian style we typically see but has more of an 80s postmodern vibe.

 

Cheers, trying to I guess go with 90s, around the time IOA opened.

 

Nice, quite clean. Ace's objects I'm not sold on.

 

The chairs and signage?

 

really nice has more zoo vibes than amusement park but really cool and clean shot

 

 

 

i found the colour from the entrance of the pillars of the glas building nice as lamppost

 

Thanks, yeah I need to find a better lamp post, something more jungle vibes. 

 

beautiful work. I'd love to see you take a screenshot at the proper zoom resolution though!

 

Looking forward to seeing more from you on this. Definitely missing some "life" in regards to peeps, seating, bins, maybe some signage/accent colors. Quick service on the pathways (umbrellas, etc)

 

Yep for sure, will definitely add more. Cheers!

 

 

 

That looks great - i love how the detailing of the glass structure isn't the victorian style we typically see but has more of an 80s postmodern vibe.

 

Cheers, trying to I guess go with 90s, around the time IOA opened.

 

Nice, quite clean. Ace's objects I'm not sold on.

 

The chairs and signage?

 

really nice has more zoo vibes than amusement park but really cool and clean shot

 

 

 

i found the colour from the entrance of the pillars of the glas building nice as lamppost

 

Thanks, yeah I need to find a better lamp post, something more jungle vibes. 

 

beautiful work. I'd love to see you take a screenshot at the proper zoom resolution though!

 

Looking forward to seeing more from you on this. Definitely missing some "life" in regards to peeps, seating, bins, maybe some signage/accent colors. Quick service on the pathways (umbrellas, etc)

 

Yep for sure, will definitely add more. Cheers!

 

Very cool structure. Overall, this feels a little lifeless to me, but it’s a great start and I’m very excited to see more from you!

 

Agreed, and thanks!

 

Love the windows in the rock wall, however I would use the same type of rocks throughout. Get rid of the 1k ruin rocks on the bottom and extend the same style of rocks framing the windows down to where the 1k rocks are. Just so it matches. Great screen, love the atmosphere.

 

Edit - Maybe even extend that style of rock wall way back to the left to replace the brown boring fence and the stale grey concrete side of the splashdown pond.

 

I agree, it doesn't look quite right. Yeh gotta keep the dining peeps dry!