Park / Comet

24 Comments

  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    i remember when you started this. :o

    well done robbie!
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Great details, great architecture, great coaster. Lots of great greatness, but still a 15 score from me... why?

    - Phatage's comment. Stone buildings like these on the beach seems unlogical.
    - The peepjam and stream of peeps really distracted me
    - I think you cut off the map too early. I think more beach, whether empty or not, would have given this a whole different atmosphere. I think it would be great if you moved the 'stone buildings on the beach' to the 'beach-parallel-boardwalk'. With a beach setting I'd emphasize the parallel stuff (shoreline, boardwalk, dunes or whatever runs along the horizon infinitely) instead of perpendicular stuff like you did. There's too little sea for a beach setting, in my opinion. I didn't feel the sea. This is quite complex to explain, I hope you get my point. :p

    Looking back I maybe should've scored it 16 instead of 15, but 15 is a great score nonetheless and a 15,85 score is something you should be very proud of. Congratulations on a very good design. :)

    Now finish something bigger! ;)


    edit: I just heard that there were some minor problems with my vote. Understandable considering a discussion in the accolade panel forum. My first reply was:

    Please return this to robbie. The peepjam, the spacewalking peeps and some floating objects were really annoying. The design itself was great of course, but unfortunately these little flaws were too distracting.

    It's easy to fix. :)


    But just for the record, the small errors as listed above didn't affect my vote. I assumed they would be fixed anyway! :)
  • zburns999%s's Photo
    Hmmm, the link to the download page seems to be broken at the moment? Or is nobody else getting that message? lol.
  • Cena%s's Photo

    Hmmm, the link to the download page seems to be broken at the moment? Or is nobody else getting that message? lol.

    Working perfectly here, what browser are you using? 
  • Timothy Cross%s's Photo
    Great design. Seems to get better every time I look at it. I love how there's so much to look at even though the map size is small. Also, I think Liampie touched on this, but if you extended the size of the ocean it would have given a better overview and added to the atmosphere. Overall though, Top notch stuff. :)