Park / Blizzard

4 Comments

• 

  Comment System Offline

  posted 11 years ago

  • #1
  • Back to top
• 

  prodigy Offline

  THX for hating me

  posted 11 years ago

  • #2
  • Back to top
• 

  Liampie Offline

  To me it seems you had a half finished design and decided to complete the map by scattering white grass all over the place. Really killed the landscape. The coaster was definitely not terrible, I like the colours and the supports seem very well done to me, but it's just missing something. The part after the MCBR is too short for example, and there's barely any interaction. Alright, the tunnel was good and the corkscrew very good. Loved the snow piles along the paths by the way, even though the snow colours didn't match. Lastly, the architecture was flawless (fantastic station!), but the integration into the landscape was very poor.
  
  Overall this was certainly enjoyable, I did, but there was lots of unused potential. I'm sure that if you finished this properly it would've gone to 75%+ heights. Pity it went this way! Good job on finishing anyway. A simple release is still better than no release.
  
  P.S. there's no shame in a low score every once in a while.

  posted 11 years ago

  • #3
  • Back to top
• 

  Xeccah Offline

  i'm sorry, the layout isn't very good whatsoever.
  
  the first part was really the easy way to go, into to mcbr looked bad
  
  the composition seemed forced and flow was nonexistent
  
  overall an extremely rushed attempt

  posted 11 years ago

  • #4
  • Back to top
• 

  Cocoa Offline

  yeah, I agree that the random grass and flowers just look silly. layout was OK, architecture was excellent, but I'm just confused whether this is meant to be in a 'park' or what, because one of the buildings is a facade for some reason, while the others are actual buildings- I'm having trouble imagining how this design would look in real life. if there was more on the map it would have been ace.

  posted 11 years ago

  • #5
  • Back to top