Park / Villa De La Cascada

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  Deurklink Offline

  Lovely little village, it's full of details and the buildings look really good! I also really like the boat ride going through the canals. One downside is that some of the walls are a bit glitchy for the people who don't use OpenGL.

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  MK98 Offline

  Allright, nice park! And in a decent old style. Very small and a bit focussed on only two angles though. The walls are too glitcy indeed, but easy to fix by using land blocks instead of raising the land.

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  Ling Offline

  I really love the atmosphere here. Having one side of the park have the massive height difference and the other be much more uniform works really well. The garden area on the upper 3/4 area is such a nice contrast. The fountains might have worked better if they were emptying into the canal rather than hovering next to it. The path bridging over itself is very nice though. The only complaints I really have are that the canal would have looked better if the areas where the boats turned were smoothed out some more (like more diagonal blocks instead of two full grids) and the flower colors are very dull. Another scheme might have brightened up the open areas without totally going against the red/tan/peach color palette of all of the buildings.

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  I liked the old style, very good
  The water down the canal was nice, I liked the buildings

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  Cocoa Offline

  hey this is neat work. Archy is pleasant, its lively and warm, and theres a very cool tiered structure going on to complement the atmosphere.

   

  I think it terms of the entry being focused around a flat ride/ water ride though, you could have taken a slightly more focused route. If the point was to highlight a particular ride, you could possibly have integrated that swinger and water ride in a more significant way that shows me that they are the centerpieces of the park. After making such a cool tiered landscape, its a shame that the water ride doesn't have more cool drops and aquaducts and covered tunnels with arches peeking through the side! and the swinger could have been placed prominently on an outcropping with a queue around it or something to really highlight it and make it exciting. just a thought for composure next time.

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  Liampie Offline

  It's a lovely arrangement of buildings overall. Even though it's all small structures and there's no symmetry to it, it has something monumental. The splash boats were tucked away a little too good in places, but I really like the way you executed it otherwise. The only thing I really don't like about this piece is how you for some reason built all the brick walls underground. It's super glitchy! Don't do that again next time. There's going to be a next time, right? I hope there'll be a next time!

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  posix Offline

  I thought this was great. Had a lot of heart and originality. Hope to see more from you.

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  Watercooler Offline

  Thank you for all of the feedback and sorry it took so long to reply, life has been hectic. I am sorry I did not notice the glitching walls. I learned after using GL graphics eliminates that and I did not realize this until I had already submitted it and others started to inform me of the glitching. 

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