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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Poke%s's Photo

    its gorgeous but id seriously get rid of the lines in the path.

  • Sephiroth%s's Photo
    Love the second "tier" of the backdrop. Really excellent work here.
  • FredD%s's Photo

    Really nice. Just like Poke no fan of the road lines pattern. 

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    I don't mind the road lines. I mind the overuse of fieldstone walls and the flat deco pieces that you've spammed so much that some buildings are unreadable. I don't like the castle edging either, and I'd think that a different path type would fit better than the black.

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    The bottom piece is either made by levis or ultratycoon btw.

  • chemist%s's Photo


    I don't mind the road lines. I mind the overuse of fieldstone walls and the flat deco pieces that you've spammed so much that some buildings are unreadable. I don't like the castle edging either, and I'd think that a different path type would fit better than the black.

     

    This, the colors are blending too much together and making the screen look a bit dull color wise. 

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    I think you could do a lot better with that globe as well.

  • Mattk48%s's Photo

    Yea I agree with scoop, the nipple globe takes away from the fantastic architecture in my opinion. I like the road lines on the brick but not on the concrete. Overall quality screen, very inspiring.

  • alex%s's Photo

    The top half of the screen is great. I love the buildings and how cohesive they are, almost has an LL feel.

     

    The bottom half is weird though. On the left side you have this overly dense foliage, it's like a forest inside a town? And I don't like anything about the fountain plaza on the right; the grey paths, the grass and the walls all look really dull.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Foliage should be less weeds and more gardens.  Its nice though, needs a bit of atmosphere and I think peeps should help.

  • pierrot%s's Photo

    I always thought that the road lines makes the screen worst in most cases. It simply kills the natural vibe; makes very dull and uninspiring.

     

    Lovely foliage otherwise.

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    I am on the other side of the boat, it seems. I actually quite enjoy the road lines. To me, it feels like something I'd see in a park. Uninspired, maybe, but I like it.

     

    Everything else is well done in my opinion. Keep it up, Trav!

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    i like it

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    I also liek the roadlines. Like Blazing said, they seem like something a park would do. I do miss some life though. Some more signs, or little stalls to make it less artificial would spice things up methinks.

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    i like it, i dont mind the road lines at all. the globe area definitely needs some love tho

  • Scoop%s's Photo
    TThe roadlines don’t mesh with the rest of the screen. On the more architectural side of the screen it is a bit more fluid and then the roadlines have a more unnatural feel which is why they don’t work in this screen. I agree with G Force about the foliage as well.
  • Julow%s's Photo

    Cool stuff Trav !

    I don't particularly mind the road lines, even if I would probably prefer it without them. 

    I kinda agree with Shogo about the fieldstone walls, there are too much of them, and overall the whole thing feels very brown. 

    I think it needs more details, find something that really makes it stood out instead of too much relying on 2x2 or 2x3 archy.  But what's here is nice. 

  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    I think the use of gray tarmac is the only thing throwing it off for me. I also think black road lines would be the color to use, but I don’t see the lines inside the brick as necessary - it makes sense as concrete slabs but not really brick pathing.

    Also, along the lines shotguns mentioned, the stone deco may look better the same color as the rest of the building. I do like the look of the screen in general but really may need some simplification
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    oh wow, this should be interesting

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