Screenshot / The West

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • ar2910%s's Photo
    The log flume and the turnaround on the coaster are superb! Really blended in well with the foliage and path interaction!

    The architecture seems more Australian colonial outback town than American Wild West, but all in all I think it conveys the theme well.

    My only recommendation would be to incorporate some dirt paths, or break up some of the brick a little, just to give it a more rugged and less polished feel :)
  • Impulse%s's Photo

    Simple yet lovely.

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    Thanks guys.

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    It's quite simple, but as Impulse said, it is lovely as well. Seems to be just the happy medium you need! Keep up the great work!

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    I'm not sure how I feel about this. I think ar2910 is onto something; it feels a little sterile for a theme park setting. Hopefully this just has to do with the framing and such. Rides look promising.

  • FredD%s's Photo

    Sorry Scoop but I think you can do way better archy than that. 

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Get rid of these lines! Moving the big birch one tile to the left or right will make a world of difference already

     

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  • chemist%s's Photo


    Sorry Scoop but I think you can do way better archy than that. 

     

    I have to agree, plus still tables with no seats? =p 

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    I think I can too but I don't think I need to.

  • FredD%s's Photo


    I think I can too but I don't think I need to.

     

    You do whatever you like but for me it makes the screen not very interesting or worthwhile.  

  • Julow%s's Photo

    I have to agree, it looks like something we've seen a thousand times here... But otherwise it's well done. 

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Good screen, but there something missing with that archy. I just can't put my finger on it.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    I think you need to being to focus more on the forms and shapes of your buildings, rather than just putting lots of objects on the facades.  Not bad though.

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    this screen is more sterile than a vasectomy my dude. all of the harsh diagonals are killing it. use brush as a buffer between buildings and path as well. 

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Nice, but small details on the rooftops could go a long way.

  • Scoop%s's Photo
    Yeah I realized that as soon as I posted the screen.
  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    why are you putting archy in the middle of a plaza like that? shouldnt be the other way around lol

  • RWE%s's Photo
    Solid work, but i can‘t really understand why there are tables without any chairs next to them. And the architecture feels a bit too boring and simple for me. Also I agree with Liam about the tree placement.

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