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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    Sick facade! Welcome to NE. Good grand budapest vibes. The paths are possibly a bit plain/blocky?
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    That's definitely an impressive debut screen. Agreed with Cocoa on the paths. I think you need to get rid of the concrete blocks for sure.
  • MK98%s's Photo

    Good start! I like the colors. The paths are a bit blocky indeed. Try using two textures (not concrete) and don't mix them up too much. Maybe they need a bit elevation too.

     

    Get rid of the Minas Thirth blocks. I think they are too blocky and they don't really add anything to the building.

     

    Anyway, welcome to NE!

  • Jene%s's Photo

    Thanks for the great comments and advice guys! I´m definitely going to have a second look at the entry-plaza after I'm done with the restyling of one of the trainstations in the park. I'm thinking about changing the Minas Tirith blocks, but I also really like the fact that they help keeping the itemnumbers down. I will decide on those after I've seen how they turn out with the foliage.  

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo
    Believe these guys are expert :), if you see the parks of them will impress.
    I learned a lot from them.
    I loved your building and the colors, sorry, I did not like the paths.
  • Jene%s's Photo

    Attached Image: Wonderland Hotels and Resort 2018-08-13 19-12-21.png

     

    I took another look at the entry plaza and got rid of the concrete blocks. Think it looks a lot more dynamic now. What do you guys think? Only downside are the black ´under-thingies' that appear at random. Any advice about how to get rid of those?

  • RWE%s's Photo

    this is amazing! A few more small path details here and there like lamps, benches, little stalls etc. and it's perfect for me!

     

    Welcome to NE, dude, can't wait to see more!

  • saxman1089%s's Photo
    Loads better. To get rid of the supports, use the tile inspector and move the “surface” above the object with supports in the draw order.
  • Ling%s's Photo

    Love the updated screen. There's something slightly RCTNW about this, but with more warmth.

  • MK98%s's Photo

    The big planter with the track is awesome!

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Welcome to New Element! Loving the debut screen and hoping to see more of you soon! Good to see you listen to advice, really like the improvements you made to make the initial work even better already.

  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    Great intro to the site! Version 2 is a fantastic screen, great improvement with the path change!

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    Big time fan of NE since I discovered it about a year ago. So amazing to see what you guys can build. So after a long time of just fooling around with OpenRCT I decided to try and create a proper park. First thing I build was this Grand Hotel that also functions as the entry point to the park. Looks a bit static now, but I hope to bring it more to life when I start with the foliage. Suggestions and tips are apreciated!

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