Screenshot / Entrance area, Full project should be out within the month

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screen_5858 Entrance area, Full project should be out within the month

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posted 5 years ago
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barnNID Offline

The supports for the log flume were inspired by Ottersalad's supports in his newest park. I more or less copied them so credit to him/her
posted 5 years ago
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roygbiv Offline

interesting

peach road lines are a tad confusing but overall nice look
posted 5 years ago
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Splitvision Offline

Buildings look nice and clean, interesting and convincing without being cluttered. I agree on the road lines looking a bit odd though. Perhaps try filled shapes rather than just outlines? And I'd also experiment a bit with the color of the dinghy slide, I feel the beige might not be the optimal choice.
posted 5 years ago
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MrTycoonCoaster Offline

I liked the details applied to the roof, it was cool
the peach arrow was good, maybe continue more arrows not just 2 arrows
posted 5 years ago
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barnNID Offline

Thanks for the feedback everyone, I'll re-evalute the color scheme on the log flume, it does seem weird. Also those peach lines are scrapped, you guys are right, they look aweful
posted 5 years ago
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Jak Offline

Nice screen! I love the way the dark brown walls and the black roofs work together. I do think that the log flume could use some more detail though.
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Jappy Offline

I really like that entrance! Very bulky but well made.
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Faas Offline

Looks good and different. Maybe a bit cramped for an entrance. I would continue the track at the splashdown for the log flume. Log flume track always continues.
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][ntamin22 Offline

welcome welcome indeed!
posted 5 years ago
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Scoop Offline

You and in:cities would make a great duo. But I do agree about the road lines.
posted 5 years ago
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In:Cities Offline

Yeah man! I love your stuff. Would love to work with you in the future.

As for the waterslide colors, I definitely agree that they need to be changed.

Instead of the random peach lines, I'd throw a white concrete planter in there with a nice little shade tree and flowers to give it some color accents. Incorporate some seating alongside it as well. Think of how parks are in real life - you need a spot for guests to sit and get their stuff together / wait for their lingering family who are in the bathroom / feed their crying kid (who they should have left at home) etc. More often than not, they do this RIGHT at the entrance of the park before they fully get inside haha. Just a thought!

Great start so far.
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Faas Offline

Looks good and different. Maybe a bit cramped for an entrance. I would continue the track at the splashdown for the log flume. Log flume track always continues.

To add to the first point, I would remove the fenced-off square pieces under the entrance "supports" and just make the path connect to them, to give the entrance gates a bit more breathing space.
posted 5 years ago
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barnNID Offline

Thanks for the comments everyone!

I changed the color of the waterslide from beige to the same brown as the supports are

I also removed the peach lines, I'm going to replace them with In:Cities suggestion.
posted 5 years ago
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Xtreme97 Offline

Good work, definitely feel like you're developing your own style. Nice use of the dark browns in this palette btw
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