Screenshot / cliffside snackery
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28-December 19
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Two things though.
The two rocks in the right part of the screen next to the lift car look like they're almost floating. They're also the same orientation, which can be a little distracting.
The rapids along the dock look a little too tight. It might look a little better if you extend the water to flow underneath the dock. It looks a little unnatural and strange. I also think it needs some sort of bumper or border to help guide the rafts a bit.
Very minor points of feedback though man. I'm stoked you're building again! Always love your work.
If you get the bumper rails in place you can hide the rapids track too, which helps clean it up in my opinion. Great screen, love the atmosphere.
I still hope you change up the color of the lift towers! Liking it so far otherwise.
^Yeah, the lift towers would look nice in black I think.
I'd try find a way to give things more breathing space because everything looks a bit cramped. The seating especially is squished in between the rapids and the coaster supports without even a quarter-tile width buffer. The individual elements are nice though.
Honestly you might be able to fix the cramped problem but deleting a few tables and only have 1/2 or so of the tables have umbrellas on them.
Right now it doesn't really seem to make sense to have that many covered tables, there isn't any food places immediately adjacent or even in the direct vicinity. Probably could adjust it to just be a lookout area with the water cannons or something and be just fine.