Screenshot / The Big Smoke

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • In:Cities%s's Photo
    This map is gorgeous. H2h quality. Elegant and well composed throughout, with tons of great details to discover. Great work, both of you
  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    i def think its worth highlighting the carriages more with some differentiating bright colours - it looks to be a "dark, drab" atmospheric steampunk aesthetic but that doesn't mean we can't add in some pop!

  • spacek531%s's Photo

    The use of coal produces enough soot that the color black was a face saving measure - everything was colored with black soot so you might as well paint everything black or the carriage would look dirty. This phenomenon is probably best-highlighted by the evolution of the Peppered Moth.

  • Gustav Goblin%s's Photo

    Amazing screen dude. You pulled a lot more weight on this park than I expected and the end result looks incredible, especially for something made in a week. It was a real pleasure partnering with you on this.

     

     


    i def think its worth highlighting the carriages more with some differentiating bright colours - it looks to be a "dark, drab" atmospheric steampunk aesthetic but that doesn't mean we can't add in some pop!

    I really wanted to but I ended up using different colors per vehicle for the horse and cab. Wish there were an option to do both. If I really wanted to I could have had several different hansom cab rides with different colors merging onto the bridge track.

  • Jaguar%s's Photo

    I though this was almost h2h quality, definitely one of the best parks of the contest. Despite the gloomy theme, it was very lively and fun to look at.

    My only suggestion would be to add some vertical blocks to those paddleboat wheels so they look less lopsided.

  • alex%s's Photo

    Great screen RWE, the architecture at the top there is fantastic.

  • RWE%s's Photo

    Thank you all for the comments. Interesting thoughts, Sammy, Jag and spacek, also glad to see you like this, Josh and alex.

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