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for the few of you who liked the other screen. this minis turning out to be really fun to build.

I like it. It's something different. Maybe a little bit too much yellow, maybe throw in some grey or dark orange/gold to break it up a bit.

Just a layout. Ignore everything around it, it's all horrible.

Dude come on. I can see you're not shooting for anything big, but at the same time want something that will pack a punch. Think about it a little bit more and try to include some more unusual elements that can actually impress some one.

-JDP

kinda reminds me of L4D...
crayzee.

i think it need something to give it some life atm, maybe something to break up the angular feeling. maybe more planters, possibly a cracked hydrant pouring out onto the street, something to add a little fun factor. maybe two cars collided, things like that i can imagine fitting in well here.

kinda reminds me of L4D...
crayzee.

i think it need something to give it some life atm, maybe something to break up the angular feeling. maybe more planters, possibly a cracked hydrant pouring out onto the street, something to add a little fun factor. maybe two cars collided, things like that i can imagine fitting in well here.

Theres plenty more things to be added yet,ive already started adding cracks to the road

good, its stuff like that we usually see in your work that makes it that bit better, and i for one have come to expect it

RRP - very interesting SS you have there. Such a contrast in building styles on the left and right sides. Will be interesting to see the finished version of these area. Like Hans stated, I could see this in a studio park!.

Looking forward to the additions you have planned.

James

I brought this up a while back; time for Dump place v2? we could continue to page 300, then we could start a new one.

Open a new one on 01-01-2010.

Yeah sounds good. That could be my new years eve promise of the year: open a new dump place I think I can keep that one, atleast.

regarding the supports, i think thats the best ill be able to do, the bridge, heres a wooden one ive been playing around with.

Edited by Lowenaldo, 30 November 2009 - 02:45 PM.

Fix the supports and remove the glitches.

uh ohhhh, someones improving
try adding some vertical supports to the brick texture .

also a little more texture on the bridge wouldnt go unmissed.
the atmosphere its giving of atm is wierd... i couldnt imagine it in real life.
if feels like forest, with a fuck off concrete bridge in... i cant see it... can you?
maybe some other signs of advanced civilisation, or maybe a bit of a more simplified bridge will help the screen, at least in my eyes. its all juxtaposing in a bad way atm. some neutral browns and deep reds instead of purple may help...

good screen though, its looking good

The bridge seems a bit unsupported, and also a bit too thin. And as sammy said some more texture wouldn't hurt. Nice interaction with the coaster though and with a little work this'll look great. BTW check your inbox in a minute

WIP go karts

I think the wooden bridge is too open and the concrete bridge is too textureless.

lacrosse - it's interesting but it's weird how the building looks like it's been chopped in half.

Estalia - The most recent discovery at Excavation Valley in Karak Kadrin.

a little more color and i will love it forever

not trying to be a dick, but i think that screen is a mess.

Louis: Its unfinished but I know I just dont know what to put there.

not trying to be a dick, but i think that screen is a mess.

No worries




I know it's not much but meh, I felt like showing it.

What's the bobsleigh track meant to represent? some kind of canvas? if so you need another pole in the middle.