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Love that.

looking forward to what you do with the buildings around the flat because it seems a bit strange. great start though brah
-JDP

Just thought i would post something since i haven't in a while

Why is the color of the whole screen that ugly? I think the supports for the Woody aren't enough. The architecture is very nice.

Good architecture. Missed landscaping opportunity. You should have some intimidating jagged mountains on that empty strip of land to serve as the backdrop for the coaster. Like Monument Valley, only denser. The seatings look like "I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO PLACE HERE". You can do more with that. It's a western area, right? Plenty of ideas for such a small path of land: rodeo ride, gold washing, shooting gallery. It's that kind of small theme-specific ideas that make themes immersive.

Good luck. You're improving rapidly! Glad to see you're not wasting your talent on 'lifeless mud + concrete + generic, boring rides' parks.

That's so much improved over your old stuff! Not sure why the colors look so gross in that picture... but it's very nice! ^His advice is really good though.

The picture looks odd because when you edit a screenshot in paint and save it as a certian file type (not sure which one) it loses some quality and the colours go strange

But I agree, you've improved alot, i'm really liking the western architecture.

Your spot on Xtreme97, I made the screen smaller with paint so thats why the colours look like shit really

@Colorado-fan : Yes i will add more supports and thank you

@Coasterfreak101 : Thank you very much i am hoping that i improve with every screen i hope thats coming across to you guys

@Liampie : Thank you for yet again a in-depth look at what i done wrong/can do right, I will look to implement what you have said the shooting range was top of my list with a rodeo stadium not to substantial but enough for hourly shows which is in construction. Plus your suggestion of jagged rocks would fit very well with that area as where the dried bushes are is a dry river bed that existed a few thousand years ago

Any more criticism/suggestion are very very welcome

Why not..

I would either flip the track colors so the spine is the light red and the rails are dark red or make the rails grey. But other than that that's a great screen.

Beautiful.

Your screens are getting more and more interesting, Coupon. I love the looks of that station. Please pay attention on the foliage though, I feel like it could be done much better under the lift hill.

Just thought i would post something since i haven't in a while

Do you have any idea about how fast you are improving?!?
It's not something top level yet, but if you keep this up you're gonna end up pretty high.

You've got my interest.

Thankyou

I would either flip the track colors so the spine is the light red and the rails are dark red or make the rails grey. But other than that that's a great screen.

Completely agree. Looks great though.

ScOtLaNdS_FiNeSt, You've really come a long way. I really can see that your work is inspired alot by Coupons. Which is not a bad thing.

I love these colors the way they are.

Be a Ride Warrior

sexy...

holy fuck!