(Archive) Advertising District / Jag's progress thread

I finally came crawling back after not playing for a little while.


Aerial of Chicago Forest Park's progress.


Part of a castle for a new park I am building

That was a Wolfman style 'retirement'.

BTW...your park needs more jagged rocks.

That was a Wolfman style 'retirement'.

BTW...your park needs more jagged rocks.

I already have a huge amount in the middle. Look forward to a jagged rocks theme park in the future.

Doesn't look too bad

Thank you Louis.

Now for some screens that are a little bit more noteworthy.

Just finished this today:

Anyone?

Remember...an opinion solicited does not equal one freely voiced.

are you going or an industrial theme?

I'm glad you're not giving up, to get better at something you just need to keep working at it. I always thought it was weird that people gave you a hard time just because you were playing the game the way you wanted to. As far as constructive criticism goes, I'm not good at giving it in RCT, but that log flume looks weird and your buildings are too blocky.

Your screens seem to lack transition between themes.
That arabic tower really messes with that industrial theme..

I agree with chorkiel. =)

I believe that it is supposed to be a Luna Park-type thing. I'd say its technically not bad but lacks planning, especially with the colors. It's getting there, though.

I don't like it at all, Just not my cup of tea ... But the "old fashioned log flume" would work if you were doing a seaside resort in the 1920-1950's with theming of the same time and with the wooden coaster. This screen just looks confusing

the sorry part of your work jag...

you know how to do all the things as in you have the technical ability to pull off great things like hacks and such, but you simply have not got any grasp of aesthetics.... and that puts it down everytime, the ideas are good but you don't execute them in an aesthetic context...

hope that helps you :s

Here are some new screens:

Jag's getting good. Add some more ideas and details to give the area some life but I'm impressed how far you've come.

good job. keep up the hard work.

Thanks for the nice comments.

Do you guys think I have a chance at being drafted?

I think its a real tough decision for the captains to draft the people that isn't the obvious pick so i would say you do and so does most other people, Its really tight i would hate to be a captain

I dont care for the green color on that red building in the last screen. It almost blends in with the grass surrounding it. Everything else is good.