The shape of the buildings is magnificent, but everything is so textureless. A very good start. Now add some more textures and details!
Still needs work on color. The white sucks all of the attention, the balcony still doesn't work (keep it the pink/beige that the rest of the building is). Add more detail as Sulakke said.
This is not bad. With a few changes this could be pretty good work. The white doesn't work, i would suggest changing it to black, you definitely need to add more details and other colors than this pink. For details just play around with some windows, fences and other little objects and you'll see, you can do wonders with little things. Just try to make this building more inviting and appealing and this will be amazing.
Just take yourself some time and work on everything, until you think it is perfect. Be skeptical with yourself! You'll see: It's worth it!
Wow, thanks for all the comments, guys. I appreciate them, and have taken the advice and constructive criticism. I've added some more details and changed some details around, and I believe it looks even better now:
You could still add some more textures to the walls, but besides that it looks great. Nice work and good to see you using commentary to improve your work.
A massive improvement!
This is much better! Good work!
Not quite as unreasonable as 0%. Just vote for what you think it's worth. Skewing the score is dumb.
Well I truly believe everything I have shown is worth 0% .
No you don't.
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