Screenshot / Sorcerer station
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04-October 23
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Chatham Lake
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That clearance though...
The building's edge looks so much better now. Great job there. There still has to be a better way to get to the corks after the airtime hill. honestly even a flat turn in the air would be better than having the dip up into the cork. Everything also just feels a bit bare. some mowed grass objects, underbrush objects, or even some patches of small rock work could really elevate this little area. Lastly the trees are very segregated. Just try and mix them up instead of relegating them to their own clumps. Keep up the improvements though. It's coming along bit by bit.
I think is quite effective in achieving a certain look - which is a bare bones generic American theme park. More finishedness would help, and if you want to excel in this genre, I think you need to add something different. A unique ride, an eye catching element in the ride or architecture or just something that hasn't been done before in general.
More specific feedback: the black stripe, is that an arrow? In this shade the object loses its texture and it's hard to make out what we're looking at. Interupting that awning (it's an awning right?) will also help the viewer make sense of the geometry.
There's some grass overlapping with the train tracks in a way that I wouldn't expect.
edit: on discord someone pointed out it's a fence, not an awning. Case in point
I really like the gravel under the trainrails, not sure if I have seen this before but it looks very convincing, good execution!
I think some awnings over the queue line block would make sense. Imagine a <30°C day waiting there in the sun. The sparse trees won't supply enough shade.
Some bushes mixed into the selection would also improve your foliage here.
The station building is pretty nice, not sure if white is a good choice for the flat roof portion, though. We cannot see the other part of the little plaza but I really hope there will be another similar building to to tie it more together. As it is atm, the station is just there on it's own and some minor theming elements on the plaza would really help to bring it into the park. Maybe in connection with the aforementioned queue awnings? Doesn't have to be something huge.
Thanks for the feedback, Liampie and Tolsimir. As I said on Discord, I'll go back and fix the coloring issues with the fence and the bushes.
I like the tracks and the underground I could only imagine in the realistic that the train in the fence in the curve could get stuck otherwise everything relatively solid
Not sure what you mean the train in the fence in the curve could get stuck???