Screenshot / Sorcerer entrance

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  posted 7 months ago

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  Jappy Offline

  I like the use of the white flowers here! And it feels pretty quaint.

   

  If I may give some tips....

  - Replacing one of those birches in the middle for another tree would be a good idea to create some variation;

  - The foliage on the water edge is pretty straight, perhaps try to add some irregularity to it. 

   

  But all in all, this has some potential. Looking forward to it!

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  Dark_Horse Fan Offline

  Thanks Jappy.  Yeah, I'll definitely go back and fix the straightness of the waterside foliage.

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  AJ- Offline

  this is fun, would love to walk under that ride, great interaction

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  RWE Offline

  not much to see, but whats there looks nice.

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  not much to see, but whats there looks nice.

   

  Cool story bro.

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  Faas Offline

  I would give the lampposts a different secondary colour instead of making them all black. Also i would use a higher fence for the path directly near the water.

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  Dark_Horse Fan Offline

  Great points. I'll go back and change the lamps for sure.

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  Liampie Offline

  I like it man

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  Dark_Horse Fan Offline

  Thanks Liampie.

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