Screenshot / Jurassic Park River Adventure 1

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  posted 11 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  The roof feels a bit thin to me, but I don't know how you would thicken that up.

   

  Try adding a bit more of that darker green into the foliage too. Good stuff though

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  Cocoa Offline

  ^I would put the angled wood trim on it and then add cross bits to it. That was a poor explanation

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  In:Cities Offline

  ^I agree. I haven't touched this file in months, and that was one of the first things i've been meaning to fix haha. Thanks guys!

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  A.S.Coasters Offline

  Would be best to do something like this on the underside to make it look more beefed up

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  Midnight Aurora Offline

  There's Louis again, worrying about how to thicken things up. You dirty girl.

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  BelgianGuy Offline

  for starters, give the roof some more support work internally,will make it look more grounded instead of it just magically staying up...

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  tyandor Offline

  This screen reminds me of Eggheads H2H version of Jurrasic Park which is a good thing. Too bad he never finished it (have a copy myself though ).

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  FredD Offline

  Roof needs more supporting. I'm looking forward to see this more finished, I know you can make something beautiful from this.

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