Screenshot / Mechanical Garden

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo
    I think you can do something better than just checkerboard for the interior. But the screen looks fantastic, love the colors and foliage. Really cool stuff.
  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    that looks awesome. loving all the yellow

  • Recurious%s's Photo

    It's so weird but I really like it.

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo
    WTF I loved it :) Nice Work
  • olddtfan51%s's Photo

    great screen. Love the concept.

  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    The theme comes across without being overbearing or unrealistic. Nice work.
  • mintliqueur%s's Photo

    This is fantastic! But yeah, I agree with G Force about the interior.

  • Mattk48%s's Photo

    I think you nailed the foliage, It really adds to this screen. Carousel cover looks great, as does the coaster. Nothing looks out of place really.

     

    The archy on the palace is great, But as mentioned above you really need an interior. A grand interior would take this screen from good to something special in my mind. Maybe one side could be a ball room dance floor kinda deal, with a banquet hall on the other side and reception area in the middle. It doesn't matter what you decide to do, but something has to go in there.

  • Alfy%s's Photo

    Wow love this screen. The custom supports look amazing. As many have said the interior look a bit bare. I think maybe instead of doing a checkerboard interior, make them diamond style instead. Might make it less grid like looking. Still amazing building, love the atmosphere!

  • chemist%s's Photo
    I agree with force, interior looks bland but this scenery reminds me of the great gatsby movie, lookin nice
  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Really good stuff. I think you succeeded in making it feel like a garden. Not as easy as it looks, so well done. The golden ornamentation on the builder is perfect. What I'm not sure of is how wide the gate into the building is. I would continue the vertical lines from the window above all the way to the ground.

  • Jene%s's Photo

    Thnx guys. I'm glad you like the foliage. As I already said, it took me quite some time. I love how you guys start about the interior of the hotel, I was so focused on the park and foliage that I hadn't even thought about an interior. I'm gonna work on that!

     

    @Liampie; I get what you're saying. The gate is going to be one of the entrances to the park so I do think it needs to be quite large, but I agree that it is very open now. I think I'm going to experiment with it once I get the park full with peeps. 

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    Lovely open spaces and gardens
  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    i just want to add that the use of the hobbit door is perfect. definite +1 in skill level when you start using objects in nonstandard ways like that

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    Hey guys,

    Here´s an update on my new project. I got inspiration from the concept art for Cirque du Soleil´s Mechanical Gardens. I´ve struggled a lot with the foliage. I wanted to give it a bit of a mediteranean garden kind of vibe (like the Alcazar Gardens in Sevilla) but without all of the straight lines. Advice on the foliage (as well as on other aspects of the screen) are welcome.

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